Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unnecessary self-deprecation and grammatical errors (e.g. use 'I'm not interested in' and 'when I go to places'). Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I’m not interested in taking photos when I go out. Usually I prefer to relax and play games with my friends instead, so I focus on socializing rather than photographing the scenery.

Sugestão: Give a clear answer and support it with two precise reasons using linking words (e.g. 'because' and 'for example'). Reduce hesitation and correct common errors: say 'urban areas' not 'cities area', 'different kinds of people', and 'your confidence and communication skills will improve'.

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas because you can meet different kinds of people and learn new things. For example, talking with strangers or attending events in the city often boosts my confidence and improves my communication skills.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clear, polite language. Explain one or two concrete reasons with correct grammar (e.g. 'I prefer foreign countries because I feel freer' and 'I can try new activities without worrying about people I know'). Avoid vague phrases like 'judge news' and fix verb forms (e.g. 'you can do what your heart wants').

Exemplo: I prefer visiting other countries because I feel more independent and less judged by people who know me. For instance, when I travel abroad I’m more willing to try new foods and activities without worrying about my relatives’ opinions.

× No, I don't really like to take pictures of different places because I'm quite boring person and whenever I go some places with my friends I always stay quiet and play with games and different things but I don't interested taking pictures.

✓ No, I don't really like taking pictures of different places because I'm a quite boring person and whenever I go to some places with my friends I always stay quiet and play games and different things, but I'm not interested in taking pictures.

Multiple issues: 'I'm quite boring person' needs an article and adjective order: 'I'm a quite boring person' (article error/word order). 'I go some places' requires the preposition 'to': 'go to some places' (incorrect use of prepositions). 'play with games' is incorrect collocation; use 'play games' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs/collocation). 'I don't interested taking pictures' is incorrect because 'interested' requires a form with 'be' and the preposition 'in': 'I'm not interested in taking pictures' (incorrect use of adjectives or verbs with prepositions). Suggestion: add articles where needed, use correct prepositions 'to' and 'in', use correct collocations like 'play games', and use gerund after preposition 'in'.

× I prefer, uh, uh, cities area because there are different kind of people you will meet there and uh, you will conversate your, everything will be improved because if you meet new, if you feel your, uh, confidence level will boost and your communication.

✓ I prefer city areas because there are different kinds of people you will meet there, and your communication will improve because meeting new people will boost your confidence.

Problems: 'cities area' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'city areas' or 'cities' (article/order). 'different kind of people' should be plural 'different kinds of people' (singular/plural issue). 'you will conversate your' uses a nonstandard verb; use 'your communication will improve' (incorrect verb choice). 'everything will be improved' is vague and passive; better to say 'your communication will improve' (word choice/passive). 'if you meet new, if you feel your, uh, confidence level will boost' is ungrammatical and mixes clauses; correct to 'meeting new people will boost your confidence' and move 'boost' to active use with subject 'meeting new people'. Suggestion: use plural forms where needed, choose correct collocations ('different kinds of people'), use 'boost your confidence' and a clearer sentence structure with subject and verb agreement.

× I suggest uh foreign countries because in foreign countries there is no relatives to judge news.

✓ I prefer foreign countries because there are no relatives around to judge you.

'I suggest foreign countries' is odd in this context; 'I prefer' fits the question (word choice). 'in foreign countries there is no relatives' has number agreement and article problems: use 'there are no relatives' (singular/plural and verb agreement). Also 'to judge news' is incorrect; likely intended 'to judge you' or 'to judge what you do' (incorrect use of prepositions and nouns). Suggestion: use 'there are no relatives around to judge you' or 'there are no relatives to judge what you do'.

× You can do anything your heart want.

✓ You can do anything your heart wants.

'your heart want' is incorrect because the verb must agree with the singular subject 'heart': third person singular '-s' is required: 'wants' (third person singular issue/subject-verb agreement). Also 'can do anything your heart wants' is the correct idiom. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects in number and person.

× So for this purpose I go suggest uh foreign countries.

✓ So for this reason I would suggest going to foreign countries.

'I go suggest' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I would suggest' or 'I suggest' (incorrect verb phrase). Also 'for this purpose' is slightly awkward; 'for this reason' fits better. 'suggest going to foreign countries' is the correct verb + gerund structure. Suggestion: use 'suggest' followed by a gerund ('suggest going to...') and choose appropriate modal 'would' for politeness if desired.