Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngữ pháp đúng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết minh chứng với liên từ thích hợp và tránh lặp từ. Chú ý thì động từ (it helps), danh từ số nhiều (photos) và cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax. For example, when I photograph a sunset or a city skyline, I focus on the colours and composition to capture the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không trả lời trực tiếp (dùng 'Yes' không rõ chọn urban hay rural) và có từ sai nghĩa ('naughty'). Cần nói rõ bạn thích vùng đô thị hay nông thôn, giải thích lý do cụ thể với ví dụ, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (modern, peaceful, crowded, scenic...). Giữ 2–3 câu, dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so'.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I like modern architecture and the lively atmosphere. For instance, I enjoy photographing busy streets, skyscrapers and colourful markets that show city life.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời mơ hồ, ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (subject-verb agreement, 'they are my familiar'). Cần bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer...), giải thích lý do cụ thể (familiarity, culture, memories) và đưa ví dụ ngắn. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'moderately meaningful' — thay bằng 'more meaningful' hoặc 'more meaningful to me'.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel more familiar and meaningful to me. For example, landscapes and historic sites remind me of childhood trips and local traditions.

× Yes I do, it help me feel comfortable and when I take photo of different beautiful views.

✓ Yes, I do. It helps me feel comfortable when I take photos of different beautiful views.

The verb 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so use 'helps' (subject-verb agreement). 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' because 'different views' implies more than one; use appropriate plural noun. Also split into two sentences and remove the extra conjunction for clarity. Suggestions: ensure verbs match their subjects (he/she/it + -s in present simple) and use plural nouns when referring to multiple items.

× Yes, I prefer views in a pan because it is very modern and naughty. Of course I have my friends and family here.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in a town because it is very modern and noisy. Of course, I have my friends and family here.

The original uses 'pan' and 'naughty' which are incorrect word choices. Replace 'pan' with 'town' or 'city' to refer to an urban area. 'Naughty' (misused adjective for people) should be 'noisy' to describe a modern urban environment. Also add a comma after 'Of course' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: choose correct nouns and adjectives for context and proofread word choice.

× Yes, I think my love our country because they are my familiar and in moderately meaningful to me.

✓ Yes, I love our country because it is familiar and moderately meaningful to me.

Pronouns and subject structure are incorrect: 'my love our country' should be 'I love our country' to use the correct subject and verb. 'They are my familiar' is wrong because 'country' is singular and should be referred to as 'it' and described as 'familiar' (adjective) rather than 'my familiar'. Remove unnecessary preposition 'in'. 'Moderately meaningful' is acceptable but position it after the adjective. Suggestions: ensure correct subject pronoun 'I', match pronoun number with noun (it for singular), and use correct adjective placement.