Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on clarity, correct grammar, and concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and incorrect phrases (e.g. ‘needed like’, ‘UV cursor’, ‘bad memories’). Use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes and city skylines to remember the place. Also, I like to capture details such as colorful buildings or unusual plants because they show what makes each location unique.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then add one clear, specific reason with an example. Reduce fillers (‘you know’, ‘uh’) and correct collocations (e.g. ‘warm tone’, ‘goodwill’ unclear). Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’ to structure your answer.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel peaceful and natural. For example, the rolling fields and small villages often have warm colors at sunset, which creates a calm atmosphere perfect for photography.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a specific example. Fix grammar errors (e.g. ‘I prefer views in my own country rather than other countries’) and complete your thought—explain what you mean by ‘good atmosphere’ and how people contribute. Keep it to one or two supporting sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the places and people. For instance, local festivals and friendly neighbors make parks and streets feel welcoming, so sightseeing at home feels more comfortable and meaningful.

× I needed like taking picture of different UV cursor.

✓ I need to take pictures of different views.

The sentence uses incorrect verbs and noun forms: 'needed like taking' is ungrammatical and mixes past and progressive forms. 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views'. 'UV cursor' is likely a mishearing of 'views'. Use simple present 'I need to take' to express a general habit or preference. Suggestion: use subject + verb (simple present) + to-infinitive for actions you regularly want to do: 'I need to take pictures of different views.'

× It's a bad memories for me.

✓ They are bad memories for me.

Number agreement error: 'memories' is plural so the pronoun and verb must match. Use 'they are' for plural. Also 'a bad memories' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun; remove the article. Suggestion: match subject and verb number and avoid adding 'a' before plural nouns.

× I really love to taking a photo and I think it's a different view is it's beautiful for another country.

✓ I really love taking photos, and I think different views in other countries are beautiful.

Incorrect use of 'to taking' — after 'love' the gerund 'taking' or the full infinitive 'to take' is allowed, but not 'to taking'. 'Photo' should be plural when speaking generally. The clause 'I think it's a different view is it's beautiful for another country' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'different views in other countries are beautiful.' Use subject-verb agreement ('views ... are'). Suggestion: use either 'love taking' or 'love to take' and ensure clear clause structure.

× It's good.

✓ That's good.

While not strictly grammatical, 'It's good' is vague in context. 'That's good' is a more natural response to a preceding statement. Suggestion: use demonstrative 'that' to refer to the previous idea.

× I really love taking a photo every view when I saw it.

✓ I really love taking a photo of every view when I see it.

Use 'taking a photo of' and plural 'every view' implies 'a photo of every view'. Tense consistency: 'when I saw it' mixes past with general habit; use present 'when I see it.' Suggestion: keep simple present for habitual actions: 'I really love taking a photo of every view when I see it.'

× I really love the people viewing urban area or rural area.

✓ I really love viewing people and places in both urban and rural areas.

Original is unclear and misuses 'the people viewing urban area or rural area.' Probably intended to express liking views of people and places. Correct by clarifying subject and objects and use plural 'areas.' Suggestion: reorder sentence to make meaning clear: 'I really enjoy viewing people and places in both urban and rural areas.'

× For me, I think, you know, I prefer rural area because it's, uh, some add like a warm, warm tone and I really love the mood in the rural areas, such as the seeing the goodwill in the countryside.

✓ For me, I prefer the rural areas because they have a warm tone, and I really love the mood in the countryside, such as seeing the goodwill among people.

Multiple issues: 'rural area' should be plural or with an article 'the rural area(s)'; subject-verb agreement 'they have' for plural. 'Some add like' is nonsensical—replace with 'they have' or 'they have a warm tone.' 'the seeing the goodwill' is ungrammatical; use 'seeing the goodwill among people.' Suggestion: use clear noun phrases, correct articles, and match subjects and verbs.

× I prefer a will in my own country more than auto county because uh in my country have a good atmosphere and the people is.

✓ I prefer to stay in my own country more than to travel abroad because my country has a good atmosphere and friendly people.

The original contains many incorrect words ('a will', 'auto county') possibly from transcription errors; interpret intent and correct grammar: use 'prefer to stay ... rather than travel abroad' or 'I prefer my own country to other countries.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'my country has' and 'people are friendly' or 'friendly people.' Suggestion: use clear comparative structure 'prefer X to Y' and correct verb forms and noun choices.