Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use linking words to group similar items and avoid repeating words (e.g., don’t say "taking pictures" twice). Also keep it concise (max 4–5 short sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I especially like natural scenes such as mountains, the sea and wildlife, because they change with the light and tell a story. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets to capture the colour contrasts and moving waves.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words (e.g., "because" and "for example"). Avoid vague phrases like "about the environment" and minimize hesitations.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. For example, mountain ridgelines and coastal cliffs help me relax, and the fresh air and open space are refreshing compared with noisy city streets.

Sugestão: Remove filler words and repetitions; give a clear opinion and specific reasons or a brief example. Use correct grammar (singular/plural agreement) and simple linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid spoken hesitations like "uh" and repeated words.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I would like to visit Japan for its mountain temples and the USA for snowy national parks, where I could photograph winter scenes and try playing in the snow.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially taking photos of uh, environment like umm, mountains, seas, ocean, animals in the surrounding and anything.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially photos of the environment, such as mountains, the sea, the ocean, animals in the surroundings, and so on.

Multiple preposition and article issues: 'photos of the environment' uses correct preposition 'of' not 'taking photos of environment'; 'like' replaced with 'such as' for examples; 'seas' should be 'the sea' or 'the sea and the ocean' depending on meaning; 'in the surrounding' should be 'in the surroundings'. Suggestion: use 'of' with 'photos', use articles 'the' for specific natural features, and use 'such as' to introduce examples. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I prefer views from rural areas because it's so relaxing and it's so refreshing to see, uh views from mountain seas and about the environment.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are so relaxing and so refreshing to see, such as mountain scenery and the natural environment.

Subject-verb and reference problems: 'views' is plural so pronoun and verb should match ('they are' not 'it's'). 'From rural areas' or 'in rural areas' is more natural; 'mountain seas' is incorrect collocation — likely meant 'mountain scenery'. 'About the environment' is awkward; 'the natural environment' is clearer. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs/pronouns and use natural collocations for landscapes. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Well honestly I want to look views from other country like umm in Japan, in USA.

✓ Well, honestly I want to see views from other countries, like Japan and the USA.

Preposition and number errors: 'look views' is incorrect — use 'see views'. 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries'. 'In USA' needs the definite article 'the USA' or 'the United States'. Suggestion: use 'see' with 'views', pluralize 'country' when speaking generally, and include 'the' with 'USA'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× It seems that the the the scenery are beautiful and I imagine it myself uh uh experiencing in snow playing.

✓ It seems that the scenery is beautiful, and I imagine myself experiencing and playing in the snow.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'scenery' is an uncountable noun treated as singular, so use 'is' not 'are'. Remove repeated 'the'. 'I imagine it myself experiencing in snow playing' has incorrect pronoun and word order — better: 'I imagine myself experiencing and playing in the snow.' Suggestion: treat 'scenery' as singular, avoid filler repetition, and use correct reflexive pronoun placement and natural word order for activities. Grammar problem type ID:27