Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. 'taking and focus momentum').

Exemplo: Not really. I prefer to enjoy a scene in person rather than photograph it because taking photos can distract me from the atmosphere. For example, when I visit a beach I like to sit and listen to the waves instead of trying to get the perfect shot.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly, and avoid vague or repetitive phrases. Mention particular features you like (e.g. mountains, parks) to make your answer more concrete.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I feel more relaxed in open-air settings. For example, I enjoy walking in the countryside where I can smell fresh air, see fields and hills, and hear birds, which I find much more peaceful than city streets.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and avoid hesitation. Decide whether you prefer local or foreign views, then give clear reasons and one specific example. Reduce filler words ('uh') and fix grammar (e.g. 'hasn't' vs 'doesn't have').

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because my local area is mostly mountains and desert, which can be monotonous. For instance, I would like to visit places with coastal scenery or lush forests abroad to see more variety and greenery.

× No actually I don't like taking pictures when I was outside because I prefer enjoying the views and the vibes and taking and focus momentum taking pictures.

✓ No, actually I don't like taking pictures when I'm outside because I prefer enjoying the views and the atmosphere rather than taking pictures.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with a general present habit; use present 'I'm' for current situations (Grammar problem type 6 Present tense issue). Also 'prefer enjoying' is awkward; use 'prefer enjoying' or better 'prefer to enjoy' — here 'prefer enjoying the views' is acceptable but 'the vibes' is informal; 'atmosphere' fits better. Removed redundant fragments 'taking and focus momentum taking pictures' which are ungrammatical (sentence structure error); simplified to contrast preference.

× To be honest, I prefer views in open air areas because I feel more comfortable and I enjoy the nature.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in open-air areas because I feel more comfortable and I enjoy nature.

Use of 'open air' should be hyphenated as the adjective 'open-air' (grammar type 11 Incorrect use of prepositions/word form). 'Enjoy the nature' is unidiomatic; drop the article and say 'enjoy nature' (grammar type 22 Article errors). Tense is present and correct but small collocation and article fixes improve grammar.

× Also I like to see how it goes to smell fresh air and I like in in general speaking like the views and the pictures and open air areas.

✓ Also I like to feel how it is to smell fresh air, and in general I like the views, the pictures, and open-air areas.

Original has incorrect and redundant prepositions and phrases: 'see how it goes to smell' is ungrammatical — use 'feel how it is to smell' or 'experience smelling fresh air' (grammar type 11). Remove duplicated 'in in' (typographical/repetition error). Hyphenate 'open-air' and reorder for clarity (sentence structure error 26).

× Uh, no, my country, uh, hasn't, uh, have, uh, beautiful, uh, places and views here uh, because as you know, uh, I live in a village, so almost all the areas here are, uh, just the, uh, mountains and desert, uh, some places, like we can see green places, uh, but.

✓ No, my country doesn't have many beautiful places and views here, because, as you know, I live in a village, so most of the area here is just mountains and desert. In some places we can see green areas, though.

Original sentence mixes contractions and incorrect auxiliary verbs 'hasn't... have' causing subject-verb problems; use 'doesn't have' for negative with 'my country' (grammar type 27 Subject-verb agreement errors and type 2 Third person singular issue). 'Almost all the areas here are' is awkward; 'most of the area here is' is clearer and matches singular/plural agreement (grammar type 1 Singular and plural issue). 'Green places' -> 'green areas' for natural collocation. Split into two sentences for clarity (sentence structure issue 26).