Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, keep it concise (max 5 sentences), add a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and article usage, and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, last time I climbed a mountain to watch the sunset and I took many pictures because the colors were beautiful. I then shared my best shots with friends so they could enjoy the view too.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, correct grammar (subject–verb agreement), avoid vague phrases like "and so on," and add a specific reason with linking words. Limit to up to five sentences and finish the sentence fully.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I feel more relaxed in nature. For instance, I enjoy quiet mountain landscapes and calm rivers, which help me unwind. In contrast, urban areas are often crowded and noisy, so they are less appealing to me.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., possessive and agreement). Be specific about what you like, and use linking words to add a reason about convenience or cost, with correct comparative forms. Keep it concise and error-free.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because China offers a wide variety of landscapes, from mountains to coastlines. Additionally, I feel a strong personal connection to these places, and it is usually cheaper and easier to travel domestically than abroad.

× Yes, I'm really into taking pictures, especially when something catches my eyes.

✓ Yes, I'm really into taking pictures, especially when something catches my eye.

The phrase 'catches my eyes' is incorrect because 'catch someone's eye' is an idiom meaning to attract attention; 'eye' should be singular. Use the present simple verb 'catches' correctly with the singular noun 'eye'. Suggestion: remember idiomatic expressions and use 'eye' singular after 'catch my'.

× I remember that last time I climbed to the mountains and see the sunset, I took a lot of pictures and shared them with my friends.

✓ I remember that last time I climbed the mountains and saw the sunset, I took a lot of pictures and shared them with my friends.

The sentence mixes past and present forms. 'Remember' can introduce a past event, so verbs describing that event should be past tense: 'climbed' (keep) and 'saw' (not 'see'). Also 'climbed to the mountains' is unnatural; use 'climbed the mountains' or 'climbed up the mountain'. Suggestion: keep verbs describing past events in past tense and use natural prepositions ('climb the mountain' or 'climb up the mountain').

× Definitely the rural areas because I think I'm kind of person who are grounded and I love the quiet and peaceful sceneries like the mountains, the sea, the river and so on.

✓ Definitely rural areas because I think I'm the kind of person who is grounded and I love quiet, peaceful scenery like mountains, the sea, and rivers.

Multiple issues: 'the rural areas' can be 'rural areas' in this context; 'I'm kind of person' needs an article ('the kind of person'); relative clause requires singular verb 'who is' (subject-verb agreement); 'sceneries' is usually uncountable 'scenery', and listing should use plural nouns consistently ('rivers'). Also remove unnecessary commas and 'the' before generic nouns. Suggestion: use 'the kind of person who is', use 'scenery' or plural count nouns appropriately, and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses.

× Urban areas are too crowded and too noisy, so.

✓ Urban areas are too crowded and too noisy, so I prefer rural areas.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'so.' and lacks a main clause explaining the consequence. This is a sentence structure issue combined with incompleteness. To correct, complete the thought by adding the speaker's preference. Suggestion: always finish sentences that use 'so' with the resulting clause (e.g., 'so I avoid them' or 'so I prefer rural areas').

× I prefer my own country's view because their diverse scenery in China from mountains to seas to rivers and I have deep connection with them.

✓ I prefer my own country's views because China has diverse scenery, from mountains to seas to rivers, and I have a deep connection with them.

Pronoun reference is unclear: 'their' does not correctly refer to 'my own country's view'; use 'China has' or 'my country has'. 'View' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. Also 'have deep connection' needs an article 'a deep connection'. Suggestion: make the subject explicit ('China has') or use 'my country has', use plural 'views' for generality, and include articles where needed.

× On top of that, it is much cheap cheaper to visit this.

✓ On top of that, it is much cheaper to visit here.

Word order and comparative form are incorrect: use the comparative adjective 'cheaper', not 'much cheap'. Also 'to visit this' is incorrect; use 'to visit here' or 'to visit my country'. 'Much cheaper' is natural, or 'far cheaper'. Suggestion: use 'much' before comparative adjectives ('much cheaper') and use correct locational words ('here' or 'my country').