Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (chia động từ, danh từ số nhiều, mạo từ), cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp ý. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi phát triển bằng 1-2 câu ngắn có liên kết (ví dụ: vì lý do, sau đó). Hãy dùng các liên từ đơn giản như "because", "so", hoặc "and" một cách chính xác và giữ câu không quá dài.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I like collecting pictures and hanging them on my walls. I often take shots of city streets and parks, and I display my favorites in my living room to make the space more personal.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, ‘depend’ → ‘depends’), tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ mạch lạc để so sánh hai lựa chọn. Trình bày rõ quan điểm chính ở câu đầu rồi đưa ví dụ cụ thể, mỗi ý không quá hai câu.

Exemplo: I prefer both depending on the subject because cities offer striking architecture and lively street scenes, while rural areas provide peaceful natural landscapes ideal for scenic photography. For example, I like photographing modern buildings and busy markets in the city, but I also enjoy capturing sunrise over fields in the countryside.

Sugestão: Tránh nói lặp và hoàn thành ý. Nên cho câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer... or It depends...), giải thích lý do cụ thể và kết luận ngắn gọn. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp thứ tự thông tin hợp lý.

Exemplo: It depends, but I usually prefer taking photos in my own country because it has many natural landscapes and familiar scenes that I know how to capture well. However, I also enjoy photographing abroad when I visit developed cities, since they offer different architecture and cultural details that are interesting to document.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different view because I like collect many picture and hang it on the walls.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like to collect many pictures and hang them on the walls.

The nouns 'view' and 'picture' should be plural ('views', 'pictures') to match 'taking pictures' and 'many'. 'Collect' needs the infinitive marker 'to' after 'like' in this context and 'them' refers back to 'pictures' (plural). Suggestion: check noun number consistency and use 'like to + verb' for habitual actions.

× I think it's depend on some aspects.

✓ I think it depends on some aspects.

Use the third-person singular present tense 'depends' after 'it' (subject-verb agreement). 'It's' (it is) + base verb 'depend' is incorrect. Suggestion: match verb form to subject: 'it depends'.

× In the city it have many buildings, restaurants, so people can take a beautiful picture easily.

✓ In the city it has many buildings and restaurants, so people can take beautiful pictures easily.

Subject 'it' requires third-person singular verb 'has', not 'have'. Also 'a beautiful picture' is better as plural 'beautiful pictures' to align with general statement. Suggestion: ensure singular subjects use singular verbs and maintain number agreement between nouns and quantifiers.

× But in but in the rural areas it have many landscapes, natural, beautiful uh na landscape network and beautiful nature.

✓ But in rural areas there are many landscapes and natural scenic areas and beautiful nature.

Avoid repetition ('but in but in') and incorrect verb 'have' for 'it'. Use 'there are' to introduce plural items. Phrase 'natural, beautiful uh na landscape network' is awkward; replace with 'natural scenic areas'. Suggestion: use 'there is/are' for existence and simplify adjective order.

× So it's a good an idea to take a picture.

✓ So it's a good idea to take pictures.

Use only one article ('a' or 'an'); 'a good an idea' is incorrect. Also prefer plural 'pictures' for general activities. Suggestion: remove extra article and match noun number to context.

× I think it depends on some aspect.

✓ I think it depends on some aspects.

Make 'aspect' plural to match 'some'. 'Some' requires a plural noun. Suggestion: use plural nouns with 'some'.

× In my country it have it has a natural landscape and beautiful nature so people can take a picture easily.

✓ In my country it has natural landscapes and beautiful nature, so people can take pictures easily.

Remove duplicated verbs ('have it has'). Use plural 'landscapes' to generalize and plural 'pictures' to match 'people'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× But in the other country have is developed and my country have many buildings and.

✓ But other countries are more developed, while my country has many buildings.

Incorrect word order and mixed verbs ('have is developed'). Use 'are developed' for plural 'other countries' or 'is more developed' for a singular 'another country'. Also finish the sentence; avoid trailing 'and'. Suggestion: choose consistent subject number and corresponding verb form and complete the comparison clearly.