Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it is a bit long and repetitive. Aim to keep it within 2–3 concise sentences: give a clear topic sentence, then one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repeating similar ideas (e.g., "memories" and "emotions"). Also watch small phrasing issues ("when it was taken" → "when it was taken") to sound smoother.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures, especially when I travel, because they help me remember how I felt at the time. For example, a photo of a sunset in Lisbon always brings back the atmosphere and emotions of that evening.

Sugestão: Good balance and direct answer, but some grammar and word choice errors reduce clarity ("natures" → "natural scenes"; "what I feel" → "how I feel"). Combine sentences with a linking word to make the reply more coherent and add one specific example to make it vivid.

Exemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views, but it depends on how I feel and what I want to capture. For instance, I prefer cityscapes at night for dramatic lights, whereas I choose rural scenes in the morning for peaceful landscapes.

Sugestão: Your response addresses the topic but is slightly off: the question asks for a preference (own country vs other countries). Begin with a direct statement of preference, then support it with reasons. Also correct word choice and grammar ("indulges" is wrong here; use "allows" or "enables"; plural "perspectives"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and give a concrete example of what you gain from traveling abroad.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to new cultures and perspectives. For example, photographing a traditional festival abroad helped me understand local customs and inspired new ideas for my photography.

× Yes, I do love taking pictures especially when I travel so that when I look into the picture I can remember how I felt at the moment and it brings a lot of memories and emotions during that time it was taken.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures, especially when I travel, so that when I look at the pictures I can remember how I felt at the time, and they bring back many memories and emotions from when they were taken.

Issues: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' with 'love' (not required for affirmative statements) and incorrect verb forms and pronouns. Use 'look at' rather than 'look into' for viewing pictures. Match plurality: 'pictures' and 'they' for agreement. Use 'at the time' rather than 'at the moment' for referring to a past moment; use past passive 'were taken' to refer to when the pictures were taken. Also add commas to separate clauses for clarity and readability.

× I like both capturing city lights, cityscapes and natures, but it also depends on what I feel at the moment and what I really need to capture.

✓ I like capturing both city lights and cityscapes, and nature, but it also depends on how I feel at the moment and what I really want to capture.

Errors: 'both' should coordinate two items; reorder to 'both A and B'. 'Natures' is incorrect — use the uncountable noun 'nature'. Replace 'what I feel' with 'how I feel' for natural English, and 'need to capture' -> 'want to capture' to match intention. Commas improve clarity.

× I consider the subject and the scenery in front of me.

✓ I consider the subject and the scenery in front of me.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately to describe a habitual action, so no change is needed.

× Travelling and discovering new places offers more opportunity and experiences.

✓ Travelling and discovering new places offer more opportunities and experiences.

Subject-verb agreement: compound subject 'Travelling and discovering' is plural, so use plural verb 'offer' not 'offers'. Also use the plural countable noun 'opportunities' to match general meaning.

× It indulges you to interact with the community and different cultures which will help you grow and define new perspective.

✓ It allows you to interact with communities and different cultures, which will help you grow and develop new perspectives.

'Indulges you to' is incorrect collocation; use 'allows you to' or 'encourages you to'. 'Community' should be plural 'communities' in this context. Add a comma before the relative clause. Use 'develop' rather than 'define' for growing and gaining perspectives, and plural 'perspectives' to match meaning.