Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the sentence natural, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Use correct noun forms and a linking word if you add extra information. For example, say you enjoy photographing landscapes and why (memory, relaxation, composition).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of scenery when I travel because it helps me remember places and capture interesting compositions.

Sugestão: Answer clearly with a direct choice (urban or rural), then give a specific reason. Avoid unclear pronouns and repetition. Use linking words like because or so to connect reason. Keep it to 1–2 sentences total.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because open landscapes and natural scenery help me relax and feel refreshed.

Sugestão: Make a clear choice or explain that you like both, but state the reason concisely. Remove repeated phrases and use specific details (e.g., cultural differences, architecture, scenery). Use linking words like however or and to contrast or combine ideas. Keep to two sentences max.

Exemplo: I like views in both my country and other countries: my country’s landscapes are familiar and comforting, while abroad I enjoy different architecture and cultures that broaden my perspective.

× Yes, I like taking picture scenery when I travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of scenery when I travel.

The student used singular 'picture' where plural 'pictures' is required and omitted the preposition 'of' before 'scenery'. 'Pictures' matches the plural meaning of taking multiple photos. Use 'taking pictures of scenery' which is the correct collocation. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items (pictures), and include the preposition 'of' after 'taking pictures'.

× I prefer you if yours everywhere areas because the the open landscapes are natural scenery help me relax and feel refreshed.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the open landscapes and natural scenery help me relax and feel refreshed.

The original sentence misused pronouns 'you' and 'yours' and repeated words 'the the', producing unclear meaning. The student likely meant to prefer rural areas; 'rural areas' is a noun phrase replacing the incorrect pronouns. Also 'open landscapes and natural scenery' requires 'and' to connect two nouns, and 'help' agrees with the plural subject. Remove redundant words. Suggestion: Replace incorrect pronouns with the correct noun phrase, eliminate repetitions, and use conjunctions to join related nouns. Ensure verb agrees with plural subject ('landscapes and scenery help').

× I prefer my country views and another country because is the because the another country have a shame that another country have a different world views and my country different views.

✓ I prefer the views of my own country as well as those of other countries because other countries have different perspectives while my country has its own distinct views.

The original sentence misused pronouns and articles ('another country', 'is the', 'the another country') and had subject-verb agreement errors ('another country have'). It also used awkward phrasing like 'have a shame' which is incorrect. The corrected version uses 'the views of my own country' and 'those of other countries' to refer clearly, and uses 'have different perspectives' with correct subject-verb agreement ('countries have'). Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases to compare two items ('the views of my country' vs 'those of other countries'), avoid direct translations like 'have a shame', and match verbs to plural subjects ('countries have').