Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and accurate: use correct verbs and reduce hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, correct verb forms, remove filler words, and mention a concrete example (where/when you took photos).

Exemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views. For example, last autumn I traveled to the northern hills and captured sunrise over the valleys, which looked breathtaking; I usually take wide-angle shots to show the whole landscape.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference and explain clearly with linking words. Avoid contradictory statements in the same answer. Use concise sentences and specific examples (buildings, streets, or a village you visit) to support your opinion.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the variety of architecture and lively streets. However, I also visit a nearby village for relaxation when I need peace, for instance last weekend I walked along quiet lanes and photographed traditional houses.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with an example. Reduce repetition and filler words, and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly. Mention a particular place at home that you like to visit and why it refreshes you.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because travel is expensive and I can find beautiful scenery nearby. For example, I often go to Blue Lake, where the calm water and surrounding hills help me relax and recharge after a busy week.

× I really enjoying take uh, saying breathtaking views and beautiful landscapes.

✓ I really enjoy taking breathtaking views and beautiful landscapes.

The original uses 'enjoying' without an auxiliary and combines it with the base verb 'take', which is incorrect. After 'enjoy' the gerund (-ing form) of the verb should be used: 'enjoy taking'. Also 'saying' is incorrect here; likely intended 'seeing'. Combine both corrections: 'I really enjoy taking and seeing breathtaking views and beautiful landscapes.' For conciseness, 'enjoy taking breathtaking views and beautiful landscapes' is better. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' + verb-ing and replace 'saying' with 'seeing'.

× I usually travel to uh, to northern areas for this, for those beautiful umm, breathtaking views.

✓ I usually travel to the northern areas for those beautiful, breathtaking views.

The phrase 'to uh, to northern areas' repeats 'to' and omits the definite article 'the' before 'northern areas' where a specific region is implied. 'For this, for those' is redundant; use 'for those'. Also punctuation/word order: place adjectives before the noun and separate them with a comma. Suggestion: remove duplication and use 'travel to the northern areas for those beautiful, breathtaking views.'

× I definitely prefer uh, views in urban areas because of this beautiful architecture and landscapes.

✓ I definitely prefer views in urban areas because of their beautiful architecture and landscapes.

The original uses 'this' which is singular and does not agree with plural 'architecture and landscapes'. Use the plural possessive pronoun 'their' to refer to urban areas. Also 'views in urban areas' matches with 'their beautiful architecture and landscapes.' Suggestion: ensure pronoun agreement and clarity by using 'their'.

× I mostly village, uh, I mostly visit village to uh, for, for those relaxation, the such beautiful and peaceful views.

✓ I mostly visit villages to relax and to enjoy those beautiful and peaceful views.

The original is ungrammatical and repetitive: 'I mostly village' lacks a verb; 'visit village' needs plural 'villages' or 'a village' and correct verb. 'to uh, for, for those relaxation' mixes 'to' and 'for' and uses wrong noun form; use 'to relax' or 'for relaxation'. 'the such' is incorrect order; use 'such beautiful and peaceful views' or 'those beautiful and peaceful views.' Suggestion: use clear verb phrases and correct noun forms: 'I mostly visit villages to relax and to enjoy those beautiful and peaceful views.'

× I prefer views in my own country because I don't want to, uh, to travel abroad just to see those views.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I don't want to travel abroad just to see those views.

There is an unnecessary double 'to' after 'want to'. Remove the extra 'to'. The rest is grammatically fine. Suggestion: avoid filler repetitions and unnecessary words: 'I don't want to travel abroad...'.

× So I, I really prefer views in my own country to relax and to, uh, to boost my energy to seeing those views and landscapes.

✓ So I really prefer views in my own country to relax and to boost my energy by seeing those views and landscapes.

The phrase 'to boost my energy to seeing' is incorrect: after 'boost my energy' use a preposition such as 'by' before a gerund ('seeing'). Also remove repeated 'to' and fillers. Use 'to relax and to boost my energy by seeing those views.' Suggestion: use parallel structure and correct preposition + gerund: 'to relax and to boost my energy by seeing...'.