Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify and correct grammar, be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking phrase. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit a new place I often photograph the landscape because each photo reminds me of the atmosphere and the memories from that trip.

Sugestão: Respond directly with a clear preference, then give a concise reason and a specific detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make the answer coherent and correct basic grammar errors.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I have lived in a busy city for a long time, so I enjoy peaceful countryside scenery and open spaces that feel relaxing.

Sugestão: Make the meaning clear and correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'bills' unclear). Give a direct answer, then explain with a specific reason and an example. Keep sentences simple and logical with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I appreciate familiar landmarks and local architecture. For example, I enjoy photographing historic buildings in my city since they have personal and cultural significance to me.

× Yeah, I love taking picture because every time I relocate it and that remind me of the great time of it.

✓ Yeah, I love taking pictures because every time I relocate them they remind me of the great times.

The noun 'picture' must be plural ('pictures') to match the general activity of taking multiple photos. Pronouns must agree in number: 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'pictures' (plural). The verb 'remind' must agree with plural subject 'they' so use 'remind'. Also 'time' should be plural ('times') when referring to multiple memories. Suggestion: ensure nouns and their pronouns share number and adjust verbs accordingly.

× I love taking picture because every time I relocate it and that remind me of the great time of it.

✓ Yeah, I love taking pictures because every time I move them they remind me of the great times.

The phrase 'relocate it' is awkward and likely intended as 'move them'. Using the present tense verb 'move' is natural here. 'Relocate' is more formal and usually transitive with a human/thing and less common in this context. Suggestion: use 'move' to describe repositioning photos; ensure verb form matches intended meaning.

× I think there are both beautiful in both area and I would prefer rural areas because I live in urban city for a long time.

✓ I think both are beautiful in both areas, and I would prefer rural areas because I have lived in the city for a long time.

The structure 'there are both beautiful in both area' is incorrect. Use 'both are beautiful' and plural 'areas'. 'Urban city' is redundant; 'the city' is clearer. The tense 'have lived' (present perfect) is appropriate to express duration up to now. Suggestion: reorder to 'I think both are beautiful in both areas' and use 'have lived in the city' for duration.

× I think there are both beautiful in both area and I would prefer rural areas because I live in urban city for a long time.

✓ I think both are beautiful in both areas, and I would prefer rural areas because I have lived in the city for a long time.

'Urban city' should use the definite article 'the' as 'the city' or simply 'cities' depending on meaning. 'In urban city' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'the city' to refer to the urban place where you live.

× I prefer bills in my own country because people like me who live in the living here always overlooked A reputed city and I think it is good too look at it.

✓ I prefer buildings in my own country because people like me who live here always overlook a famous city, and I think it is good to look at it.

The word 'bills' is incorrect; context suggests 'buildings'. Use 'buildings' (plural). 'Living here' is redundant; use 'here'. 'Overlooked' should be 'overlook' to match simple present. 'A reputed city' is awkward; 'a famous city' or 'a well-known city' is clearer. Also correct 'too look' to 'to look'. Suggestion: choose correct noun 'buildings' and simplify phrases like 'live here' and 'a famous city'.

× I prefer bills in my own country because people like me who live in the living here always overlooked A reputed city and I think it is good too look at it.

✓ I prefer buildings in my own country because people like me who live here always overlook a famous city, and I think it is good to look at it.

Pronoun and relative clause issues: 'people like me who live in the living here' should be 'people like me who live here'. Remove redundant 'the living'. Ensure verbs agree with subject: 'people ... always overlook' (not 'overlooked'). Suggestion: simplify the relative clause and check verb agreement.

× I prefer bills in my own country because people like me who live in the living here always overlooked A reputed city and I think it is good too look at it.

✓ I prefer buildings in my own country because people like me who live here always overlook a famous city, and I think it is good to look at it.

The use of 'overlooked' is past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, which requires the simple present 'overlook'. Change past tense to present simple for habitual statements. Suggestion: use present simple for repeated or habitual behaviors.