Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct small grammar errors; open with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words (for example, however) to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I don't really enjoy photography; I prefer to enjoy the moment instead. For example, when I travel I usually put my phone away and soak up the scenery because I find stopping to take photos interrupts my experience. However, on special occasions like family events I do take many photos with my phone.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and fix grammar (singular/plural, verb agreement). Add a specific detail or short example and use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the answer coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy peaceful, open spaces. For example, I walk my dog through quiet fields every weekend, which helps me relax and feel refreshed. Because the countryside is calm and green, I find it easier to unwind than in busy city streets.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and contains many grammar and vocabulary errors. Give a clear topic sentence (state your preference), then add two specific reasons with linking words and finish the sentence. Correct verb forms, plurals, and phrase choice.

Exemplo: I am torn, but I usually prefer views of other countries because I am curious about different landscapes and cultures. For instance, before I traveled I loved watching travel shows about mountains and architecture abroad. However, when I study or work overseas I often miss the familiar sights of my hometown, like the local parks and streets, because they feel comforting.

× I usually prefer to enjoy the moment rather than stop to take photos.

✓ I usually prefer enjoying the moment rather than stopping to take photos.

The verb after 'prefer' can be followed by a gerund when contrasting two activities. Using the gerund 'enjoying' and 'stopping' makes the parallel structure consistent and natural. Suggestion: use parallel gerund forms after 'prefer' when comparing actions.

× I also find it too hard to take good pictures because I don't have a good camera, so I tend to rely on my memory and my phone for quick snap except on special occasions where I might take more photos.

✓ I also find it too hard to take good pictures because I don't have a good camera, so I tend to rely on my memory and my phone for quick snaps except on special occasions when I might take more photos.

The countable noun 'snap' needs plural form 'snaps' when used generally. Also use 'when' rather than 'where' for occasions. Suggestion: use plural for general countable nouns and 'when' for time references.

× I prefer rural area in the countryside because I'm an introvert who appreciate peaceful and open spaces.

✓ I prefer rural areas in the countryside because I'm an introvert who appreciates peaceful and open spaces.

The speaker means rural areas (plural) and the relative clause needs third-person singular verb 'appreciates' to agree with 'who' referring to 'I' (but in relative clause 'who' refers to 'I' as the subject; however standard agreement uses 'I' as singular so 'appreciate' could be used—better to match subject: 'I ... who appreciate' or rephrase. Here matching grammatical standard: 'who appreciates' assuming 'who' refers to 'introvert' (singular). Also 'rural areas' is the typical plural. Suggestion: use plural for general locations and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses.

× I often walk my dog through quiet view every week which help me relax and feel rejuvenated.

✓ I often walk my dog through quiet views every week, which helps me relax and feel rejuvenated.

Use plural 'views' for general places and add a comma before the non-restrictive clause. The verb in the relative clause must agree with its subject 'which' referring to the activity or situation (singular), so use 'helps'. Also 'through' with plural 'views' or 'in' can work; 'through quiet views' is awkward but acceptable; better: 'in quiet surroundings'. Suggestion: pluralize nouns used generally and match verb number in relative clauses.

× To be honest, I'm just used to prefers seeing view from other countries when I was at home because I have never visited them and I'm curious about land caps and culture of other country.

✓ To be honest, I was just used to preferring views from other countries when I was at home because I had never visited them and I was curious about the landscapes and culture of other countries.

Multiple issues corrected under pronoun/related forms: 'used to' + gerund requires 'preferring' (not 'prefers'), 'views' plural, tense consistency changed to past 'was... when I was at home' and 'had never visited' to show past before past, and 'land caps' is incorrect — replace with 'landscapes'. Also 'other countries' should be plural to match 'them'. Suggestion: use 'used to' + gerund, keep noun number consistent, and maintain past-tense consistency when talking about past habits and experiences.

× However, when I study abroad, I often find myself missing the fam familiar views of my hometown so I.

✓ However, when I study abroad, I often find myself missing the familiar views of my hometown, so I take photos occasionally or keep memories in other ways.

The original ends abruptly and contains a repeated fragment 'fam familiar'. The sentence lacked completion. Ensure the sentence finishes with an action or explanation. Suggestion: remove repetitions and provide a complete clause that explains what you do when you miss hometown views.