Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer communicates the main idea but has several language and clarity issues. Reduce repetition (e.g., avoid repeating words like "and"), correct wrong word choice ("wheels" appears incorrect), and make sentences more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also watch pronunciation and article use when speaking.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph natural scenery and candid moments of my family to capture special memories. I do this so I can look back later and remember those beautiful moments.

Sugestão: The response has good content but is disorganized and contains vocabulary and grammar mistakes (e.g., "fleshy airs", extra "and", sentence fragments). Use one clear topic sentence, then provide two specific reasons linked by connectors (for example, "because" and "also"). Use accurate vocabulary such as "fresh air", "open fields", and correct word forms ("walking outdoors").

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside has open fields, plants and flowers that help me relax. Also, the air is fresher and there is less noise and pollution, so I enjoy walking outdoors and breathing more easily.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and some awkward phrasing. Make your main point in one sentence, then give specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., "for example", "because"). Avoid general phrases like "a lot"; instead give examples of attractions or seasonal changes to sound more precise.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because China has diverse landscapes and rich history. For example, you can see colorful autumn leaves in the mountains, blooming gardens in spring, and many historical sites and attractions to visit across different regions.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of the different wheels.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

The student likely used 'wheels' mistakenly for 'views'. 'Different' does not need 'the' before a plural noun when speaking generally. Replace 'the different wheels' with 'different views' to match the question and use correct noun choice and article usage.

× I like photographing the scenery of natural and and family members to memorize the beauty and the great moments so that I can cherish it later on.

✓ I like photographing natural scenery and family members to remember the beauty and the great moments so that I can cherish them later.

There is a repeated word 'and and' (typo). 'Scenery of natural' is awkward; use 'natural scenery'. 'Memorize' is not the best verb for keeping memories; 'remember' or 'capture' fits better. 'The great moments' plural requires 'them' not 'it' later. Also change 'to memorize' to 'to remember' or 'to capture' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I like large greenery like plants and flowers and and open fields which make me feel peaceful and there are few.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I like large green spaces like plants, flowers, and open fields, which make me feel peaceful and are few in number in the city.

Problems: 'large greenery' is awkward — 'large green spaces' or 'lots of greenery' is better. Repeated 'and and' is a typo. 'There are few' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what is few (green spaces) or contrast with the city. I clarified to say such spaces are few in the city to make the sentence complete and grammatical.

× There are fleshy airs and less pollution than in the city and I enjoy walking outdoor and breathing.

✓ The air is fresher and there is less pollution than in the city, and I enjoy walking outdoors and breathing it in.

'Fleshy airs' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fresher' or 'fresh'. Use singular 'the air is fresher' and 'there is less pollution'. 'Walking outdoor' should be 'walking outdoors'. Added 'breathing it in' to make the action clear and grammatical.

× I prefer views in my own country.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country.

While the original is understandable, specifying 'the views' is more natural when comparing views in different places. This is an article/definite reference choice to match the comparative context.

× China has a long history and and the larger landscapes and the scenery has changed a lot across seasons and there are a lot of places of interests or attractions.

✓ China has a long history, its vast landscapes and scenery change a lot across the seasons, and there are many places of interest or attractions.

Repeated 'and and' is a typo. 'The larger landscapes' is incorrect; use 'vast landscapes' or 'larger landscapes' without 'the'. Subject-verb agreement: 'landscapes and scenery has' should be 'landscapes and scenery change' because plural subjects require plural verb. 'A lot of places of interests' should be 'many places of interest'. I restructured the sentence for natural flow.

× So you can visit different places to to appreciate different views.

✓ So you can visit different places to appreciate different views.

There is a duplicated 'to to' (typo). The infinitive 'to appreciate' is correct; no -ing form needed here. Removed the extra 'to' to correct the sentence.