Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Работайте над точностью и ясностью выражений: избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, tense, артикли), избыточных слов и неясных фраз. Структурируйте ответ: начните с короткой темы (agree/disagree), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины с примерами и закончите коротким выводом. Используйте связки (because, so, therefore, however) правильно и не более 3–4 предложений. Также заменяйте разговорные ошибки («it's really exciting activity») на корректные фразы («it's a really exciting activity»).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it is a really exciting hobby. However, I am very busy at the moment, so I usually photograph my hometown and neighborhood instead because it is convenient and saves time. This way I can still practice photography regularly.

Sugestão: Сократите повторения и уточните предпочтение: прямо ответьте (urban or rural), дайте конкретную причину и пример. Следите за согласованием времен и местоимений (I like, when I come to talk). Используйте связующие слова (because, for example) чтобы сделать ответ логичнее. Ограничьтесь 2–4 предложениями и избегайте тавтологии («one of my favorite one»).

Exemplo: I prefer urban views, especially historical areas, because they offer interesting architecture and cultural details. For example, I enjoy photographing old streets and monuments since they tell a story and provide varied subjects. This makes photography more enjoyable for me.

Sugestão: Дайте ясный прямой ответ и поясните конкретной причиной. Избегайте неверных слов и звуков-паразитов (uh). Проверьте грамматику: 'I prefer my own country' вместо 'absolutely no debt' и исправьте структуру ('because my country has many different natural places'). Добавьте конкретный пример и не больше 2–3 предложений для ясности.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in my own country because it has many diverse natural and cultural landscapes. For example, I can easily visit nearby mountains and historic towns to photograph different scenes. This familiarity also makes planning trips simpler and more enjoyable.

× Sure, I really get this about taking future on different views because of it's really exciting activity.

✓ Sure, I really enjoy taking photos of different views because it's a really exciting activity.

The student used 'get this about taking future' which is ungrammatical. Use the present simple 'enjoy' to express a general preference and 'taking photos of different views' (present participle 'taking' used correctly now). Also replace 'future' with nothing and correct 'it's' placement. Suggestion: use 'I enjoy taking photos of different views because it is a really exciting activity.'

× However, now I have a busy schedule that's I can't visit the to taking pictures on different views.

✓ However, now I have a busy schedule so I can't visit places to take pictures of different views.

Errors include wrong relative clause 'that's I can't', unnecessary 'the', wrong verb form 'to taking' and wrong preposition 'on'. Use coordinating conjunction 'so', plural 'places', infinitive 'to take' and preposition 'of'. Suggestion: 'I have a busy schedule, so I can't visit places to take pictures of different views.'

× That's why I prefer to take pictures on my hometown or the my neighborhood because of it's really useful and it can be safe, can be helped to save time for me.

✓ That's why I prefer to take pictures in my hometown or in my neighborhood because it's very convenient and can help me save time.

Use preposition 'in' with 'hometown' and 'neighborhood' not 'on'. Remove extra article 'the'. Replace 'useful' with 'convenient' and fix modal phrasing: 'can help me save time' instead of 'can be helped to save time for me'. Suggestion: 'I prefer to take pictures in my hometown or neighborhood because it is convenient and helps me save time.'

× Actually I'm a kind of person who is really like to take a picture different place.

✓ Actually I'm the kind of person who really likes to take pictures in different places.

Use article 'the' with 'kind of person'. Verb 'like' needs third person singular 'likes' to agree with 'person'. Use plural 'pictures' and 'places', and preposition 'in'. Suggestion: 'I'm the kind of person who really likes to take pictures in different places.'

× And when I comes to speak about my favorite place, it will be a historical place, because this kind of place is really interesting and I have a hobby.

✓ And when I come to speak about my favorite place, it is a historical place, because this kind of place is really interesting and I enjoy it as a hobby.

Subject 'I' requires verb 'come' (not 'comes'). Use present simple 'is' to describe a general fact. 'I have a hobby' is vague; replace with 'I enjoy it as a hobby' for clarity. Suggestion: 'When I come to talk about my favorite place, it is usually a historical place because I find those places interesting and enjoy visiting them.'

× One of my favorite one is taking picture at different place.

✓ One of my favorites is taking pictures at different places.

Redundant 'one' after 'One of my favorite' and mismatch in singular/plural: use 'favorites' or restructure. Use plural 'pictures' and 'places'. Suggestion: 'One of my favorite activities is taking pictures in different places.'

× I think this kind of activity is really enjoyable for myself.

✓ I think this kind of activity is really enjoyable for me.

Reflexive 'myself' is incorrect here; use objective pronoun 'me'. Suggestion: 'I find this kind of activity really enjoyable.'

× If I talk about the, if I compare, uh, the another country or my country, I would say absolutely no debt.

✓ If I compare another country with my country, I would say absolutely not.

Phrase 'absolutely no debt' is nonsensical in context. Remove filler 'the' and 'uh' and restructure: 'compare another country with my country'. Use 'absolutely not' to reject the idea. Suggestion: 'If I compare another country with my country, I would definitely say no.'

× My preferred to being in my own country because of the my country has many, uh, different environmental places.

✓ I prefer being in my own country because it has many different natural places.

'My preferred to being' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer being'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'my country'. 'Environmental places' is awkward; use 'natural places' or 'varied environments'. Suggestion: 'I prefer staying in my own country because it has many different natural landscapes.'

× It's I really enjoy.

✓ I really enjoy it.

Word order is incorrect: place object pronoun 'it' after the verb 'enjoy' in English. Suggestion: 'I really enjoy it.'