Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 语法和时态要注意，尽量用完整且自然的句子；控制长度不超过5句并避免重复表达。可以改进细节描述（如具体拍了哪些景、用了什么角度或光线）并使用连接词使表达更连贯。练习把碎片化的填充词（如 uh）减少，使用更地道的短语（e.g. "when I was traveling", "from the top and the base").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. For example, last week I visited the Forbidden City in Beijing and photographed the palace from the hilltop and from ground level to capture different perspectives. I focused on the contrast between the rooftops and the surrounding gardens, which made the photos more interesting.

Sugestão: 表达要更准确、词汇选择要恰当，避免重复说法。先给出直接回答，然后用一两句举具体对比并用连接词（e.g. "On the one hand... On the other hand...")来组织答案。同时注意单词发音拼写（e.g. "preference", "vines"而不是 "creeper"）。

Exemplo: It depends — I appreciate both. On the one hand, urban views offer striking architecture and city skylines, which I find dramatic. On the other hand, rural scenes with fields, birds and flowers feel peaceful and vivid, so I enjoy both for different reasons.

Sugestão: 回答有明显语法和词汇错误（如 "preferred wheels", "picture rescue landscapes"），句子不完整。需要先给出明确回答（现在时），然后用一两个具体理由和例子支撑，避免句子中途中断。多练习常用搭配（e.g. "prefer views in my own country", "historical architecture", "picturesque landscapes"）。

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has rich historical architecture and many picturesque landscapes. For example, last summer my friend and I visited Beijing and were impressed by the imperial palaces and traditional hutongs, which offered many great photo opportunities.

× Yes, of course I like taking pictures, especially when I going out or on traveling.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures, especially when I am going out or when I am traveling.

句中缺少动词 be 的现在分词形式，短语“when I going out”应为“when I am going out”；“on traveling”搭配不正确，常用表达是“when I am traveling”或“when I travel”。建议记住动词进行时的结构：主语 + be(am/are/is) + 动词-ing；旅行可用 travel 的进行时或一般现在时根据语境选择。

× Uh, last week I went to Beijing and I took lots of photos in different views of the palace, you know, from the mountain and from the bottom.

✓ Uh, last week I went to Beijing and I took lots of photos of different views of the palace, you know, from the mountain and from the foot of the mountain.

“photos in different views”搭配不自然，应为“photos of different views”。此外“from the bottom”用词不当，描述山下应为“from the foot of the mountain”。这些都是词语搭配和过去时描述事件的正确表达。

× I liked them pretty.

✓ I liked them a lot / I thought they were pretty.

原句“I liked them pretty”结构不正确。“pretty”是形容词不能直接修饰动词“liked”。若要表示“我很喜欢它们”可用“I liked them a lot”；若要表示“我觉得它们很漂亮”可用“I thought they were pretty”。建议区分副词和形容词的用法：修饰动词用副词或副词短语，描述名词或主语用形容词。

× I don't have any pref preference, uh, because I both admire the scenery in these two areas.

✓ I don't have any preference, uh, because I admire the scenery in both areas.

原句有重复“pref preference”是口误，应为“preference”。“I both admire the scenery in these two areas”语序和搭配不当，正确为“I admire the scenery in both areas”。“both”通常与复数名词或复数结构连用，放在动词或名词前更自然。

× In urban areas, we can see lots of skies, uh, creeper and in the rural area we can see plants, birds, flowers, and they're also beautiful.

✓ In urban areas, we can see lots of sky, skyscrapers and in rural areas we can see plants, birds and flowers, which are also beautiful.

“lots of skies”应为不可数名词“sky”或用“lots of buildings/skyscrapers”描述城市天际线；“creeper”用词不当，若指高楼可用“skyscrapers”或“tall buildings”。另外“in the rural area”改成复数“in rural areas”与前文保持一致。句末用非限定性从句或并列结构更自然。建议注意可数/不可数名词和适当词汇搭配。

× I preferred wheels in my own country because we have lots of history, architecture and picture rescue landscapes.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because we have lots of history, architecture and picturesque landscapes.

此句本应使用一般现在时表达偏好，原句“I preferred”使用了过去式；“preferred wheels”是拼写/词汇错误，应为“I prefer views”。“picture rescue landscapes”显然是误写，正确词组为“picturesque landscapes”（风景如画）。建议注意时态与拼写，偏好通常用一般现在时表述。

× For example, last summer holiday my friend and I went to Beijing and we loved the.

✓ For example, last summer holiday my friend and I went to Beijing and we loved it.

句子末尾缺少宾语，“we loved the”不完整，应为“we loved it”或“we loved the city”。注意完整句子需要主语、谓语和宾语（如适用）。建议复读检查句子是否有遗漏的成分。