Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Keep the natural tone but make the response more concise and structured. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason and one brief example. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "I do" + "I like") and fix small collocation issues (use "memories" instead of "remembrance"). Vary vocabulary slightly (capture, preserve, remember) and stay within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of views. I take photos mainly to preserve memories of places I visit, especially when the light or scenery is special. For example, last month I photographed a sunset over a lake so I could remember that peaceful moment.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a concise example. Reduce repetition ("I like" used many times) and correct minor errors (use "scenery" and remove duplicate words). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and include one comparative phrase if suitable.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery and quiet landscapes. For example, when I visit Japan I choose small countryside towns over big cities because they offer mountains and traditional villages that are more photogenic.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a specific example. Avoid informal contractions like "wanna" in formal speaking; use "want to." Complete any unfinished examples ("the Swiss Alps" needs completion). Use linking words such as "however" to show contrast and offer one clear detail about what you hope to see abroad.

Exemplo: I prefer seeing views in other countries because I want to experience landscapes different from the Philippines. For instance, I would love to visit the Swiss Alps to photograph snow-capped peaks and alpine villages, which are very different from my local scenery.

× I do. I like taking pictures of the views that I like.

✓ I do. I like taking pictures of views that I like.

Redundant use of the definite article 'the' before 'views' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the noun phrase generic and more natural. Suggestion: use 'views' when referring generally to types of views rather than specific ones.

× So for example, when I go to different places, I really like capturing moments just to make sure that I have a remembrance of that moment and it's really nice having.

✓ For example, when I go to different places, I like capturing moments to make sure I have a remembrance of them, and it feels really nice.

The original sentence is awkward and contains unnecessary words ('so', 'just', 'having') and a pronoun reference issue ('that moment' followed by 'having'). Rephrase to simplify and correct pronoun agreement ('them' for 'moments') and use natural verb phrases ('it feels really nice'). Suggestion: shorten and link ideas clearly: purpose clause ('to make sure I have...') and a main clause describing the feeling.

× I like taking pictures of of the nature more than the cities, the buildings.

✓ I like taking pictures of nature more than of cities and buildings.

There is a duplicated preposition 'of of' and awkward article use ('the nature', 'the cities'). 'Nature' is generally used without 'the' when speaking broadly. When comparing, repeat 'of' before the second noun phrase or omit both: 'pictures of nature more than cities and buildings' or 'more than of cities and buildings.' Suggestion: remove duplicate 'of' and unnecessary articles; use parallel structure in comparisons.

× So for example, I like to travel to Japan. I would rather go to places that are rural.

✓ For example, I like to travel to Japan. I would rather go to rural places.

The original is not strictly ungrammatical but 'places that are rural' is wordy. Use 'rural places' for natural adjective placement. Suggestion: use concise adjective + noun order for clarity.

× Well, I've been to a lot of places here in the Philippines and it's pretty common, so I don't find it that interesting anymore.

✓ Well, I've been to a lot of places here in the Philippines, and it's become quite common, so I don't find it very interesting anymore.

'It's pretty common' is vague and 'that interesting' is informal; 'become quite common' more clearly links experience to loss of interest. Also improve adverb choice: 'very' instead of 'that' for standard English. Suggestion: use clearer linking verbs and standard adverbs.

× But I wanna try and go to different places like different countries as well, for example in Switzerland, the Swiss Alps or.

✓ But I want to try to go to different places, like different countries as well; for example, Switzerland and the Swiss Alps.

Informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' in a speaking test. Use 'try to' instead of 'try and' for standard grammar when intending an action. The example 'for example in Switzerland, the Swiss Alps or.' is incomplete; finish the list or rephrase. Suggestion: use 'want to' and 'try to', complete examples, and use proper punctuation.