Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and gives examples, but it has some grammatical errors and a bit of redundancy. Keep the response within 3–4 clear sentences, use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid phrases like "that's why I like to" which are incomplete. Add a concise topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with linking words (e.g., "for example", "so").

Exemplo: Yes — I enjoy photographing different views because the same subject can look very different from various angles. For example, I often shoot buildings at sunrise and sunset to capture the changing light and mood. This contrast makes ordinary scenes feel more dramatic and interesting.

Sugestão: Your response expresses a preference but is unclear and contains grammatical errors and odd phrasing. Produce one clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for instance"). Use correct nouns and simple adjectives (e.g., "natural scenery").

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because there is more natural scenery and a sense of calm. For instance, fields, trees and streams offer varied colors and textures that inspire my photography.

Sugestão: Your answer communicates emotion and connection, which is good, but contains grammatical mistakes and some awkward word choices (e.g., "I knew", "they makes", "same familiar limbs"). Simplify and correct verb tenses, use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "familiar places", "smells"), and keep to 2–3 sentences linking reason to feelings.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and they make me feel connected to my roots. Familiar sights and smells remind me of my family and culture, giving me a strong sense of belonging.

× For example, I like shooting buildings at sunrise and sunsets to capture half the lights, change their shape and mood and that's why I like to.

✓ For example, I like shooting buildings at sunrise and sunset to capture the light, change their shape and mood, and that's why I like to.

Student used plural 'sunsets' inconsistently and awkward phrase 'capture half the lights'. Also punctuation and parallel gerund structure needed correction. Use 'sunrise and sunset' as paired time nouns, 'the light' as a general noun, and keep parallel gerunds 'capture' and 'change'. Add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: maintain parallel verb forms and choose clear nouns. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× I prefer the rural ones because there are more natural and division scenarios is.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are more natural scenes and varied landscapes.

Original sentence had ungrammatical structure and wrong word choices: 'the rural ones' is acceptable but 'rural areas' is clearer; 'division scenarios is' is incorrect and nonsensical. Replace with 'natural scenes and varied landscapes' to convey intended meaning. Ensure subject-verb agreement and logical noun phrases. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Completely performs the true nature.

✓ They completely reflect the true nature.

Sentence lacked a clear subject and verb phrase. 'Completely performs the true nature' is ungrammatical. Changing to 'They completely reflect the true nature' supplies subject ('They' referring to scenes) and a suitable verb 'reflect'. Ensure sentences have clear subjects and verbs. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I prefer views in my own country because I knew the place well and they makes me feel connected to my roots and same familiar limbs.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and they make me feel connected to my roots and familiar surroundings.

Tense and agreement errors: 'knew' (past) conflicts with present preference; use present 'know'. 'They makes' is subject-verb disagreement; correct to 'they make'. 'Same familiar limbs' is incorrect word choice; replace with 'familiar surroundings'. Also keep number agreement: 'places' better than singular 'place' if referring broadly. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Gates and scents remind me of my culture and family which give me a strong sense of belonging.

✓ Gates and scents remind me of my culture and family, which give me a strong sense of belonging.

Main issue was punctuation: add a comma before 'which' for a non-restrictive clause. Also 'Gates and scents' is okay but ensure plural verb 'give' matches the singular phrase 'culture and family' as a combined idea; here 'which give' correctly agrees with 'culture and family'. Improve clarity by keeping the comma. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)