Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid filler phrases and correct grammar (e.g., use 'it is' or 'they are'). Use precise adjectives such as 'beautiful' or 'interesting.'

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I find landscapes and cityscapes visually interesting because the composition and light often create a striking image, and sharing these photos helps me remember special moments.

Sugestão: Clarify and organize your answer. State your preference directly, give one clear reason with a linking word, and avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases. Use correct grammar for nouns and adjectives (e.g., 'tall buildings' not 'of the tall buildings they'). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I like the patterns and scale of tall buildings. For example, skyscrapers and busy streets can look dramatic at sunset, which makes them more interesting to photograph.

Sugestão: Make the contrast clearer and fix wording ('prefer views in my own country'). Give a concise reason for preferring your country and one reason why you'd like to see foreign views. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to show contrast.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best locations and feel a personal connection to them. However, I would also like to see views abroad to discover different cultures and landscapes.

× It aesthetically pleasing after everything comes together and all of that.

✓ It is aesthetically pleasing after everything comes together and all of that.

Missing verb 'is' before adjective. English requires a linking verb (be) to connect subject and adjective. Add 'is' to form a correct present simple sentence: 'It is aesthetically pleasing...'. Suggestion: Always include the appropriate form of 'be' when describing a subject with an adjective.

× I do like taking pictures from different views because no, it's just worth it.

✓ I do like taking pictures of different views because it's just worth it.

Unnecessary filler 'no' and incorrect preposition 'from' with 'views'. The verb 'like taking pictures of views' uses preposition 'of'. Remove 'no' which breaks sentence flow. Suggestion: Use 'of' with 'pictures' and avoid filler words that confuse meaning.

× I prefer views in the urban areas because I was just like of the tall buildings they and it's quite aesthetically pleasing to to the eyes.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I like the tall buildings, and they are quite aesthetically pleasing to the eye.

Multiple issues: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'urban areas', wrong tense/phrase 'I was just like of the tall buildings', pronoun placement and agreement, and 'to to' duplicate. Correct preposition/phrase is 'in urban areas'. Replace 'I was just like of' with 'I like'. Use 'they are' to link subject and adjective. Use singular 'eye' in the idiom 'to the eye'. Suggestion: Simplify clauses, use correct articles for general statements, and ensure subject-pronoun agreement.

× But then I saw his like everything. Urban areas are so beautiful with great mood and and she has season enthusiasm.

✓ But then I saw how everything — urban areas are so beautiful and have a great atmosphere and seasonal charm.

Original contains unclear pronouns ('his', 'she') and awkward phrasing 'saw his like everything' and 'great mood' and 'season enthusiasm'. Replace with clearer expressions: 'how everything', 'have a great atmosphere', 'seasonal charm'. Ensure pronouns refer correctly or use nouns. Suggestion: Use clear referents and standard collocations: 'atmosphere', 'seasonal charm'.

× I do prefer using my own country, but I would like to experience some other views in other countries as well.

✓ I prefer views in my own country, but I would like to experience views in other countries as well.

Unnecessary 'do' and 'using' after 'prefer' and redundant 'other' before 'countries'. 'Prefer' is used directly with noun phrases: 'prefer views in my own country'. Remove 'using' which is incorrect here. Also avoid repeating 'other' twice. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' followed by the thing preferred and keep sentence concise.