Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and one brief example. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep sentences short (max 3–4 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it lets me explore new places. For example, instead of only visiting one landmark, I visit several neighborhoods to capture varied scenes like markets and parks. This shows my friends how much I travel and discover.

Sugestão: Give a clear statement then support with two concise, specific details. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "places" not "locations" repeatedly) and avoid filler phrases. Use linking words like "because", "for example", or "also" to make the response coherent. Keep to under five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer more variety of subjects to photograph. For example, I can capture restaurants, shopping malls and lively streets, which give me different scenes and lighting to work with. Also, city locations are more accessible, so I can take photos more often.

Sugestão: Clarify your preference—choose one or explain both clearly. Use complete sentences and specific reasons. Avoid fragmented sentences and redundant phrasing. Structure: topic sentence, one supporting reason, brief example. Use linking words like "however" or "also" if comparing.

Exemplo: I like taking photos both in my country and abroad because each offers different experiences. For instance, at home I can capture familiar cultural details, while abroad I discover new architecture and landscapes that I haven't seen before. Therefore I try to photograph in both settings when I travel.

× I like taking pictures of many views because it's boring when you take picture at one particular place and people will be like this guy is not exploring he only go to this place to take pictures.

✓ I like taking pictures of many views because it is boring to take pictures in only one particular place; people might say, 'This person is not exploring; they only go to that place to take pictures.'

Run-on sentence, missing articles and incorrect verb forms. 'It's boring when you take picture' should be 'it is boring to take pictures' (infinitive after 'boring' and plural 'pictures'). 'This guy is not exploring he only go' is two clauses that need separation and correct subject-verb agreement: 'they only go' or 'he only goes'. Use clearer punctuation and pronoun agreement. Suggestion: split clauses, use 'to take pictures', plural nouns, and correct verb agreement.

× So I like exploring.

✓ So I like exploring.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is acceptable. Included for completeness because it follows previous sentence. No change required.

× I like taking pictures in many views for people to see how I am exploring.

✓ I like taking pictures of many different places so people can see how I explore.

Incorrect preposition and awkward phrase 'in many views.' Use 'of many different places' or 'of various views.' 'For people to see how I am exploring' is wordy; 'so people can see how I explore' is more natural. Use simple present 'I explore' to match habitual action.

× I do prefer views in urban areas because there are plenty locations there.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because there are plenty of locations there.

Unnecessary auxiliary 'do' can be omitted in simple preference statements. Missing preposition 'of' in 'plenty of locations.' Use 'prefer' for general preference.

× We can talk up the restaurants, we can talk up the spots, we can talk up the drinking bar, I can talk of the entertainment, you can talk about about the malls and other stuff.

✓ We can talk about the restaurants, the popular spots, the bars, the entertainment, the malls, and other attractions.

Incorrect phrasal verb 'talk up' (means praise) and repetition 'talk about about.' Use 'talk about' or 'discuss.' 'Drinking bar' is unnatural; use 'bars.' Streamline list and use parallel structure.

× So there are plenty locations that that's the reason why I like taking pictures in the app.

✓ So there are plenty of locations; that's the reason why I like taking pictures in the city.

Missing 'of' after 'plenty.' 'That that's' is redundant. 'In the app' is likely incorrect contextually; 'in the city' or 'there' fits the meaning. Clarify intended location. Use proper punctuation to separate clauses.

× I prefer view in my own country and other countries because taking pictures in my own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country and in other countries because taking pictures in my own country...

Missing plural noun 'views' and missing articles or prepositions 'in my own country and in other countries.' The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation. Maintain plural 'views' to match context.

× Was teaching me I'll be in one particular phase so I'd like to travel to different places to explore and see how those places look like so I like taking pictures in my country and.

✓ It taught me that if I stay in one particular place I will be in a rut, so I like to travel to different places to explore and see what they look like; therefore I enjoy taking pictures in my country and abroad.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical: 'Was teaching me' lacks subject. Replace with 'It taught me that...' 'I'll be in one particular phase' is unclear—'in a rut' conveys intended meaning. Use conditional 'if I stay' and infinitive 'to travel.' 'See how those places look like' should be 'see what they look like' (do not use 'how' with 'like'). End sentence clearly and avoid trailing conjunctions. Ensure tense consistency.