Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural and article usage, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. For example, mention what kinds of views you like and why.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I especially like photographing city skylines and coastal landscapes because the light changes throughout the day and creates dramatic colours.

Sugestão: Answer directly and coherently. The reply is unclear and irrelevant. Give a clear preference (urban or rural), then add a reason using a linking phrase (because, since, for example). Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy open fields and natural scenery; for instance, I like photographing quiet farms and forests where the composition is simple and peaceful.

Sugestão: Avoid strong negative wording about your country and improve grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a specific reason and an example using a linking word (because/so/for example). Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: I usually prefer taking pictures in other countries because the architecture and culture are more varied; for example, I enjoy photographing ancient temples and colourful street markets when I travel.

× Yes, I love taking picture of a different view.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' is countable and here refers to photos in general, so the plural form 'pictures' is required (Singular and plural issue). Also 'a different view' suggests one specific view; the context asks about taking pictures of various views, so 'different views' is more natural. Use plural when speaking generally about multiple items. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple or nonspecific items (taking pictures of different views).

× I like boss.

✓ I like the boss.

The original sentence omits the article before a singular, specific noun. 'Boss' is a singular countable noun and needs a determiner; 'the boss' specifies a particular person. If the student meant they like being a boss, the correct form would be 'I like being a boss.' Suggestion: Add appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') or rephrase with a gerund if describing a role ('being a boss').

× My country is boring so I prefer taking picture or going in other countries.

✓ My country is boring, so I prefer taking pictures or going to other countries.

Multiple issues: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (countable noun plural). The phrase 'going in other countries' uses incorrect preposition; use 'going to other countries' (preposition error, but per instructions only correct types in list — Article errors and preposition are in list: 11 is prepositions, so include that). Also missing comma before 'so'. The corrected sentence uses plural for general activities and correct preposition 'to'. Suggestion: Use 'taking pictures' for general activity and 'go to' for movement toward countries; include a comma before coordinating conjunction when linking two independent clauses.