Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence, and avoid repetition. Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words like "but" or "however" appropriately and keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Not really — I'm not a big fan of taking photos as a hobby, but I do like capturing moments that are meaningful to me. For example, when I'm traveling or celebrating with friends, I take a few pictures to remember the occasion. Overall, I prefer enjoying the moment rather than photographing everything.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your conditional preference, correct grammar (e.g., "if I visit"), and avoid repeating words like "architecture" excessively. Add one specific example and a linking phrase to make it coherent. Keep it to three sentences.

Exemplo: It depends on where I am — abroad I tend to prefer urban views. For instance, when I visit European cities I admire the historic buildings and detailed architecture, so I photograph city streets and landmarks. However, at home I sometimes prefer natural landscapes.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (singular/plural, article use, and remove filler words). Provide one specific detail about your country and a brief example. Use linking words like "because" to connect reason and example, and keep it concise.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Ukraine has both beautiful natural scenery and impressive city architecture. For example, my hometown of Lviv is very historic and picturesque, with old streets and ornate buildings that I enjoy photographing.

× Here what I think taking pictures it can be as a hobby for someone.

✓ Here is what I think: taking pictures can be a hobby for someone.

Original sentence has extra and misplaced words ('it can be as a hobby') and lacks proper structure. Use a clear introductory phrase 'Here is what I think:' then a simple predicate 'taking pictures can be a hobby.' Remove 'it' and 'as' which are unnecessary. Suggestion: keep subject 'taking pictures' followed by modal 'can' and noun phrase 'a hobby.'

× I'm not a big fan of this activities, but what can I say that I really like picturing or depicting or memorizing something that is very memorable for me.

✓ I'm not a big fan of these activities, but I really like capturing things that are memorable to me.

'This activities' mixes singular demonstrative 'this' with plural 'activities' and is incorrect; use 'these activities.' The latter clause is wordy and uses synonyms awkwardly. 'Picturing or depicting or memorizing' is redundant; use 'capturing' or 'taking pictures of.' Also 'something that is very memorable for me' is wordy; use 'things that are memorable to me.' Suggest simplifying and using correct demonstrative agreement.

× So in some cases when I have a good time.

✓ So I take pictures in some cases when I am having a good time.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb; it starts with a subordinating phrase 'in some cases when I have a good time' but no main clause. Add a main clause such as 'I take pictures' and use present continuous 'I am having' or simple present 'I have' depending on habituality. Here revised to match context of habits.

× For example, if I go abroad and I visiting some European countries, I really prefer the pictures and the views of the urban places because I really like the buildings, I really like the architecture and in European cities the architecture is incredibly beautiful.

✓ For example, if I go abroad and visit some European countries, I really prefer the pictures and views of urban places because I like the buildings and the architecture, and in European cities the architecture is incredibly beautiful.

'I visiting' is incorrect: after 'I' the base verb or auxiliary required; use 'visit' (simple present/future conditional) or 'am visiting' with appropriate auxiliary. Also reduce repetition ('really') and streamline coordination with 'and.' Ensure parallel structure 'like the buildings and the architecture.'

× But here in Canada?

✓ But what about here in Canada?

As written this is a fragment and not a complete question. Native phrasing is 'But what about here in Canada?' which clearly asks for comparison. Use 'what about' to introduce the contrast.

× It depends on the place I am in.

✓ It depends on the place I am in.

This sentence is acceptable; no change needed. It correctly uses preposition 'in' to indicate location. Included here as confirmation rather than correction.

× I prefer the views of of my own countries because I think in Ukraine, that's my country, I we have very beautiful nature as well as the architecture in the big cities is also incredibly beautiful.

✓ I prefer the views of my own country because in Ukraine, which is my country, we have very beautiful nature, and the architecture in the big cities is also incredibly beautiful.

Errors: repeated 'of of' and wrong plural 'countries'—should be singular 'country' if referring to own country. 'I we have' mixes pronouns; use 'we have' or 'I have' (use 'we have' to mean the country). The clause ordering and punctuation were awkward; use a relative clause 'which is my country' and coordinate ideas with 'and.'

× I come from Levi, which is very ancient and historically beautiful city and I think there.

✓ I come from Lviv, which is a very ancient and historically beautiful city, and I think so.

Several issues: likely place name is 'Lviv' not 'Levi.' Missing article before 'very ancient ... city' —use 'a very ancient ... city.' The ending 'and I think there' is unclear; use 'and I think so' or 'and I think that is true.' Also add comma before coordinating conjunction and fix proper noun spelling. Suggest clarifying final thought.