Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh), fix verb agreement (“it relaxes my soul”), and give one or two specific details using linking words (for example, because/so). Keep answers under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially when I travel to the mountains. It relaxes my mind because the snow-capped peaks and the well-nested villages create peaceful, photogenic scenes. For example, I often capture sunrise light on the ridges to show contrast and depth.

Sugestão: Answer directly, remove fillers, correct word choice and grammar (use singular/plural and adjectives correctly), and use linking words to explain reasons. Provide a concrete detail or short example to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are calmer and less crowded, which helps me relax. For instance, I enjoy walking by quiet rice fields and photographing farmers at work, as this peaceful setting helps me focus on composition.

Sugestão: Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar (prefer views in my own country; avoid “using”). Explain why with specific reasons or examples and link ideas (for example/because). Mention a concrete cultural element or place to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse traditions and landscapes that I know well. For example, I like photographing local festivals and historic towns, which reflect regional cultures and provide unique photo opportunities.

× it relax my inner soul.

✓ it relaxes my inner soul.

Subject-verb agreement error: the subject 'it' requires third-person singular present tense form of the verb. Use 'relaxes' not 'relax'. Suggestion: add -s for third-person singular verbs in present simple (he/she/it + verb+s).

× the snow capped, uh, snow capped mountains and and well nestled villages between the mountains.

✓ the snow-capped mountains and well-nestled villages between the mountains.

Redundancy and punctuation/compound adjective issues: 'snow capped' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective 'snow-capped'; duplicate phrase 'snow capped' and repeated 'and' are redundant. 'well nestled' is better hyphenated as 'well-nestled'. Suggestion: remove repetition, use hyphens for compound adjectives before nouns, and streamline the sentence for clarity.

× Mostly I prefer, uh, the views in the, uh, rural areas because uh, their, uh, peace calm and peace environment, uh, which helps my body to relax.

✓ Mostly I prefer the views in rural areas because their calm and peaceful environment helps me relax.

Pronoun and adjective errors: 'their' was used ambiguously but acceptable; main issues are word order and adjective choice. 'peace calm and peace environment' is incorrect word choice and order. Use 'calm and peaceful environment'. Also 'helps my body to relax' is awkward in English; use 'helps me relax'. Suggestion: reorder adjectives, choose correct adjective forms, and use natural subject pronoun 'me' with 'helps'.

× Absolutely, I prefer using my own country because my country has a different traditional cultures and different states.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer my own country because it has different traditional cultures and different states.

Incorrect verb/preposition combination: 'prefer using my own country' is unnatural; 'prefer my own country' or 'prefer to stay in my own country' is better. Also article and noun number: 'a different traditional cultures' is wrong—use 'different traditional cultures' or 'a different traditional culture'. Replace repeated 'my country' with pronoun 'it' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: use 'prefer my own country' and correct pluralization of 'cultures'.