Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer communicates enthusiasm and relevant content, but it's wordy and contains repetition. To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (where/what you photograph and why). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases (e.g., 'natural sceneries' and 'natural sights'). Watch fluency hesitations and unverbalized fillers.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of landscapes. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain trails because the colours and light change quickly, which challenges me to capture the perfect moment. As a result, photography helps me relax and appreciate nature more.

Sugestão: Your response answers the question clearly but is informal and contains hesitation, repetition and an undefined word ('ineffable') without explanation. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, one concrete reason, and a brief example. Replace vague expressions with precise descriptions of mood and atmosphere, and avoid fillers like 'umm' and repeated phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded than cities. For instance, I enjoy taking pictures of deserted farm fields at dawn when the mist and soft light create a peaceful atmosphere, which makes me feel calm and inspired.

Sugestão: Good attempt to be diplomatic, but the answer is slightly disorganized with repetition and an unnecessary preface. Improve by giving a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain why you won't compare and provide one specific aspect you like about each country to add content and specificity.

Exemplo: I don't want to favour one over the other because both countries have unique scenery. For example, Taiwan impresses me with its dramatic mountains and coastal cliffs, while the Philippines is special for its turquoise beaches and tropical islands, so I appreciate different qualities in each place.

× I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because I'm a person who really likes nature and just watching natural sceneries and natural sights on different places and I feel like it really connects to me and really makes me appreciate what our earth is like and what Mother Nature is like.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because I'm a person who really likes nature and just watching natural scenery and natural sights in different places, and I feel like it really connects with me and makes me appreciate what our Earth and Mother Nature are like.

Errors: 'on different places' should be 'in different places' (preposition use for location). 'Sceneries' is uncountable here; use 'scenery'. 'Connects to me' is less natural than 'connects with me'. Also 'our earth' should be 'our Earth' (capitalization of proper noun) and adjust 'what our Earth is like and what Mother Nature is like' to a concise parallel form. Suggestion: Use 'in' for locations, use 'scenery' as uncountable noun, prefer 'connects with' for emotional connection, and maintain parallel structure for clarity.

× I definitely prefer to take pictures of rural areas because I feel like people don't usually go there on normal days and I feel like just being in that moment in that specific setting just gives me, just gets me in a very light mood in a very umm, I've it's ineffable.

✓ I definitely prefer to take pictures of rural areas because I feel like people don't usually go there on ordinary days, and just being in that moment in that specific setting puts me in a very light mood; it's ineffable.

Errors: 'on normal days' is better as 'on ordinary days' (word choice/quantifier context). The sentence is also repetitive with multiple 'just' and has awkward phrasing 'gives me, just gets me in a very light mood in a very umm, I've it's ineffable.' Corrected to 'puts me in a very light mood; it's ineffable.' Suggestion: Reduce repetitions, choose more natural quantifiers ('ordinary days'), and simplify to clear clauses.

× Well I've only ever been to 1 country which is Taiwan and I don't think it's fair to compare Taiwan and the Philippines because I feel like they on their own have their own natural beauty and they're just unique in their own way, which I I like both of them very much.

✓ Well, I've only ever been to one country, Taiwan, and I don't think it's fair to compare Taiwan and the Philippines because each has its own natural beauty and is unique in its own way; I like both of them very much.

Errors: Numeral '1' should be written as 'one' in formal speech. The clause 'which is Taiwan' is better as apposition 'Taiwan'. 'They on their own have their own' is awkward and repetitive; use 'each has its own'. 'They're just unique in their own way, which I I like both of them very much' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Suggestion: Use clear apposition, avoid repetition ('their own' twice), use 'each' for referring to two items, and streamline final clause for fluency.