Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and maybe a brief reason. Avoid repeating similar words (e.g., "different images" and "such as"). Also keep within 3–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing sunrises and sunsets when my family and I go on outings because the changing light creates dramatic colours. For example, last summer I photographed a sunrise over the lake and the reflections made the scene unforgettable.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid vague phrases like "it feels smooth" and repetition. Use 2–3 supporting details (scenery, quiet, fresh air) and one example to make it convincing.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is quieter and full of greenery. For example, where I live there are wide fields, old trees and colourful wildflowers, which make the landscape peaceful and picturesque for photos.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer, then explain briefly. If you lack experience, say so clearly and add a hypothetical preference with a reason. Avoid unfinished sentences and be specific about what appeals to you in foreign views (e.g., architecture, culture, landscapes).

Exemplo: I haven't travelled abroad much, so I can't compare directly. However, if I had the chance I would like to see views in other countries because I am curious about different landscapes and architectural styles; for example, I would love to photograph historic European streets and Asian mountain terraces.

× I love taking different images such as the sunset and the sunrise, especially when we go out with my family.

✓ I love taking different images such as sunsets and sunrises, especially when I go out with my family.

Plural forms of countable nouns should be used when speaking generally about repeated events (sunsets, sunrises). Also use the pronoun that agrees with the speaker: 'I go out' rather than 'we go out' when the speaker is referring to their own action. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities and keep subject pronouns consistent.

× Well, I like rural areas more than the urban ones.

✓ Well, I prefer rural areas to urban ones.

Use 'prefer X to Y' to compare choices. 'More than' is not incorrect but 'prefer...to' is more natural. Also 'the urban ones' is unnecessary; 'urban ones' suffices. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' for clear comparisons.

× I'm currently living in that kind of area and I must say that I really enjoyed the view, such as the beautiful sceneries, the trees and the plants around us.

✓ I currently live in that kind of area and I must say that I really enjoy the view, such as the beautiful scenery, the trees, and the plants around us.

Present continuous 'I'm currently living' can be replaced by simple present 'I currently live' for a permanent or habitual situation. 'I really enjoyed' is past tense but context requires present 'I really enjoy'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, not 'sceneries'. Ensure tense consistency and correct noun form.

× But it feels smooth, it feels more.

✓ But it feels calmer and more peaceful.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Smooth' is not the best descriptor for a landscape; choose appropriate adjectives and complete the comparison with 'more' followed by an adjective. Suggestion: use clear adjectives and complete comparative phrases.

× Honestly, I don't have the necessary experience to go out of our country so I don't think I have the comparison.

✓ Honestly, I don't have the experience of traveling abroad, so I don't have anything to compare it with.

Use 'traveling abroad' or 'going abroad' instead of 'go out of our country'. 'I don't think I have the comparison' is unnatural; use 'I don't have anything to compare it with'. Keep tense consistent.

× But if I have given the chance, I will prefer to go or to have the view of different country because.

✓ But if I were given the chance, I would prefer to visit other countries to see their views.

Use the correct conditional form. 'If I have given the chance' is incorrect; use 'If I were given the chance' (second conditional) for hypothetical situations. 'Will prefer' should be 'would prefer'. 'Visit other countries' is natural and complete the sentence; avoid leaving a trailing 'because' without a reason.