Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Старайтесь отвечать грамматически правильно и ясно. Включите чёткое тематическое предложение, используйте связки для логики и избегайте повторов. Улучшите грамматику (например, согласование подлежащего и сказуемого, времена и местоимения) и упрощайте фразы: говорите «I enjoy taking photos of different views», затем добавьте одно-два конкретных пояснения (почему и с кем).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I like to capture landscapes because photos help me remember special moments from trips, and I often travel with close relatives, so photographing together makes the experience more meaningful.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте прямой ответ в начале и объясните причину с конкретным примером. Избегайте неуместных фраз («OK, total address») и повторов. Используйте связки (for example, because, such as) чтобы сделать ответ связным и логичным.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas. I find places like mountains and valleys more exciting because they feel peaceful and offer dramatic scenery; for example, I enjoy hiking in the countryside and taking wide landscape shots.

Sugestão: Отвечайте прямо и избегайте неуместных вставок. Дайте причину и приведите личный пример. Исправьте грамматику (предлоги, артикли, словообразование) и используйте чёткие фразы: «I prefer views in other countries because...».

Exemplo: I usually prefer views in other countries because I love exploring new places and cultures. For instance, when I visit a foreign city I enjoy photographing unique architecture and local landscapes that I can't see at home.

× When is girls taking photos on different views?

✓ When do girls take photos of different views?

This sentence has incorrect word order and verb form. 'When is girls taking' mixes present continuous with plural subject incorrectly. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'do girls take'. Also use the preposition 'of' with 'views'. Suggestion: Use 'When do' + subject + base verb for questions about habitual actions.

× I really cares about and I enjoy taking photos because of it can be assisted to remembering my special moments and my trips.

✓ I really care about it, and I enjoy taking photos because it can help me remember my special moments and my trips.

Multiple errors: 'cares' is wrong for subject 'I' (should be 'care'). 'Because of it can be assisted to remembering' is ungrammatical; use 'because it can help me remember'. 'Help' + base verb (remember) is correct. Also include 'me' as the object of 'help' and remove unnecessary 'of' and 'to'. Suggestion: Use subject-verb agreement and simple verbs: 'I care' and 'help me remember'.

× That's why I really excited and also most of the time I I travel with my close relatives that's why it can be useful activity for me.

✓ That's why I am really excited, and most of the time when I travel with my close relatives, it is a useful activity for me.

Missing auxiliary 'am' with 'excited' (adjective requires 'be'). Repeated 'I I' is a typo. Use a temporal clause 'when I travel' and a clear subject for 'is a useful activity'. Suggestion: Include appropriate 'be' verbs and use connectors: 'I am excited' and 'when I travel ... it is'.

× OK, total address.

✓ OK, to be honest,

Phrase 'total address' is meaningless in this context; likely intended 'to be honest'. Use an appropriate discourse marker. Suggestion: Use common phrases like 'to be honest' or 'actually' to express personal preference.

× Both of them are so great.

✓ Both are great.

'Both of them' is not incorrect but verbose here; 'Both are great' is more natural. No grammatical error besides register. Suggestion: Prefer concise phrasing: 'Both are great'.

× But if I choose either one, absolutely I prefer to views on the rural areas because it can be useful and so exciting.

✓ But if I had to choose, I would absolutely prefer views in rural areas because they are useful and exciting.

Use conditional 'if I had to choose' or simple preference structure. 'Prefer to views' is incorrect; 'prefer views in' is correct. 'The rural areas' is unnecessary—use 'rural areas' or 'the countryside'. 'It can be useful and so exciting' lacks agreement; 'they are' refers to views. Suggestion: Use 'prefer views in rural areas' and match plural subject with plural verb/adjective.

× And places such as the mountains and valleys, this type of places can be interesting.

✓ Places such as mountains and valleys can be interesting.

Redundant and awkward structure. Remove 'this type of places' and article misuse. Use plural nouns without 'the' for general reference. Suggestion: Say 'Places such as mountains and valleys are interesting' or 'I find mountains and valleys interesting'.

× OK, do not trust, as I said, both of them are so great, but most of the time I prefer to views on a other countries.

✓ OK, as I said, both are great, but most of the time I prefer views in other countries.

'Do not trust' is wrong here—likely meant 'don’t rush' or 'don't know'. Removed that. 'Prefer to views on a other countries' has multiple errors: use 'prefer views in other countries'. Remove 'a' before 'other' and use preposition 'in'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer views in other countries' for clarity.

× I mean for regions because of a really excited about a big fan of the exploring new places.

✓ I mean different regions because I am really excited and a big fan of exploring new places.

Wrong word order and missing verb 'am' for 'I am really excited.' 'A big fan of the exploring' should be 'a big fan of exploring'. Remove unnecessary 'a' before gerund. Suggestion: Use 'I am' before adjectives and 'fan of' + gerund: 'a fan of exploring'.

× I mean the new countries, that's why most of them I prefer to the other countries we use.

✓ I mean new countries; that's why most of the time I prefer other countries.

Sentence is incoherent: 'most of them I prefer to the other countries we use' is ungrammatical. Simplify: 'most of the time I prefer other countries.' Remove extra pronouns and wrong preposition 'to'. Suggestion: Keep sentences simple: 'Most of the time I prefer other countries.'