Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural, relevant and well-structured with a clear topic sentence and a supporting example. To improve further, shorten and tighten sentences to avoid slight redundancy (e.g., "capture memories" and "appreciate small details" overlap). Add one more specific sensory detail (colour, light, or mood) and use a linking phrase to connect reason and example for cohesion.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing natural scenes because they help me capture fleeting light and preserve memories. For example, I often photograph the golden hues of a beach sunset to remember the colours and calm atmosphere when we travel.

Sugestão: Good content and specific details, but the answer has a sentence fragment and minor repetition. Combine the fragment with the previous sentence using a linking word and add a brief comparison to urban views to strengthen coherence and contrast.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the peaceful countryside helps me unwind after a busy week; being surrounded by fields, trees and birdsong recharges me far more than the noise and crowds of urban areas.

Sugestão: The answer addresses the question but has several issues: sentence fragments, repetition, and informal contractions ("comf."). Organize into a clear topic sentence, give two coherent supporting reasons linked with connectors, and finish with a polished example and a full sentence about meeting people. Avoid fillers and fix grammar for fluency.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't travelled much and the familiar language makes trips easier. Additionally, local knowledge simplifies logistics, so I can relax and enjoy the culture. For example, I often sit on the white sand beaches of Palawan to unwind and chat with locals, which helps me appreciate the atmosphere.

× I really love snapping photos of different scenarios, most particularly in nature, because it enables me to capture memories and appreciate small details which I otherwise would miss.

✓ I really love snapping photos of different scenes, especially in nature, because it enables me to capture memories and appreciate small details that I would otherwise miss.

Use 'scenes' rather than 'scenarios' for views or landscapes; 'most particularly' is wordy and non-native—use 'especially'. 'Which I otherwise would miss' has incorrect relative pronoun and word order; use 'that I would otherwise miss'. This keeps the present tense and clarity.

× Being surrounded by fields, trees, birdsong and quiet walking paths.

✓ Being surrounded by fields, trees, birdsong, and quiet walking paths helps me unwind.

The original is a sentence fragment (no main verb). Attach a verb or combine with the previous sentence. Adding 'helps me unwind' completes the clause and clarifies the subject.

× It recharges me and feels far more restorative than urban scenery.

✓ It recharges me and is far more restorative than urban scenery.

The phrase 'feels far more restorative' is not ungrammatical but combining 'it recharges me and is far more restorative' uses parallel structure (two predicates linked to the same subject). This improves cohesion and register.

× I haven't traveled extensively so I prefer the views in my own country because the language is familiar.

✓ I haven't traveled extensively, so I prefer the views in my own country because the language is familiar.

Grammar is correct but needs a comma before 'so' when joining independent clauses. Maintain present perfect 'haven't traveled' and present simple 'prefer'—these tenses are appropriate.

× Easier logistics.

✓ Logistics are easier there.

Original is a sentence fragment. Make it a full clause by adding subject and verb: 'Logistics are easier there.' This clarifies meaning and fits the surrounding sentence.

× I feel comf.

✓ I feel comfortable.

'Comf.' is an abbreviation and not acceptable in spoken answer text. Use the full adjective 'comfortable' to be clear and formal.

× That's why I feel comfortable and I'm and I can appreciate the local culture better.

✓ That's why I feel comfortable and can appreciate the local culture better.

Original has repetition and an extra 'and I'm and I'—a spoken disfluency. Remove the repetition and keep a clear coordinated verb phrase: 'feel comfortable and can appreciate...'.

× For example, I love to sit on the white sand beaches of Palawan to unwind or soak up the idyllic atmosphere.

✓ For example, I love to sit on the white-sand beaches of Palawan to unwind or soak up the idyllic atmosphere.

Hyphenate 'white-sand' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Otherwise sentence is correct and tense fits context.

× Meet people.

✓ I also enjoy meeting people.

Original is a fragment. Turn it into a full sentence to match register: 'I also enjoy meeting people.' This clarifies the subject and verb and connects to the previous sentence.