Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên (1-2 câu chủ đề), sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể bằng cách giải thích lý do và ví dụ. Ví dụ: dùng thì đúng (I like taking photos), số nhiều/số ít (photos), loại từ (social media), và tránh lặp từ (explore, sharing).

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because it helps me remember places and moments. For example, I often photograph city skylines and mountain landscapes and save the best shots on my phone before sharing a few on Instagram.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp (choose one), dùng từ vựng chính xác (appearance/character rather than 'skin'), sửa ngữ pháp (plural/singular, because), và giải thích lý do với chi tiết cụ thể hoặc ví dụ. Tránh câu mơ hồ như 'pretty beautiful than ever.'

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the natural landscapes are more peaceful and varied. For instance, I enjoy photographing rice fields and rivers at sunrise when the light creates vivid colors and interesting textures.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời mâu thuẫn (prefers own country but wants to explore new places). Nên nói rõ lựa chọn và giải thích với lý do cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (at the same time), dùng linking words (because, so, for example).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering unfamiliar landscapes and cultures. For example, visiting Japan allowed me to photograph traditional temples and coastal scenery that are very different from what I see at home.

× Absolutely yes. I really like taking all the picture to explore and sharing it in the social media especially I would want to keep it in my memory at my cell phone.

✓ Absolutely. I really like taking pictures to explore and sharing them on social media; I especially want to keep them in my phone's memory.

'all the picture' is incorrect quantifier and noun form: use plural 'pictures' (Grammar problem type ID 14 and 1). 'sharing it' refers to plural pictures so use 'sharing them' (pronoun error, ID 12). 'in the social media' should be 'on social media' (preposition error, ID 11). 'at my cell phone' is incorrect preposition and article; use 'in my phone's memory' or 'on my phone' (preposition and article errors, IDs 11 and 22). Also 'Absolutely yes' is awkward; use 'Absolutely.' Suggestions: use correct plural nouns with appropriate quantifiers, match pronouns to noun number, use 'on social media', and use 'on/in my phone' depending on meaning.

× Umm in my perspective urban area and rural areas will have a different skin but I still refer to take a picture in rural area cause it's the nature.

✓ Umm, from my perspective urban and rural areas have different characters, but I still prefer to take pictures in rural areas because of the natural scenery.

'in my perspective' should be 'from my perspective' (preposition use, ID 11) and 'urban area and rural areas will have a different skin' is an incorrect metaphor and adjective usage; use 'have different characters' (adjective choice, ID 13). 'I still refer to take a picture' uses wrong verb collocation; use 'I still prefer to take pictures' (verb usage and plural, IDs 6 and 1). 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match context (singular/plural, ID 1). 'cause it's the nature' is informal and incorrect article use; use 'because of the natural scenery' (article/adjective, IDs 22 and 13). Suggestion: use standard collocations like 'prefer to take pictures', match singular/plural, and choose appropriate prepositions and nouns.

× It's pretty beautiful than ever.

✓ It's more beautiful than ever.

'pretty beautiful than ever' mixes degree adverb 'pretty' with comparative structure incorrectly. Use comparative 'more beautiful than ever' (comparative error, ID 25). Suggestion: use 'more' before adjectives when making comparisons with 'than' or use 'pretty' alone without 'than' for a non-comparative degree.

× Well, I prefer views of the country because I want to explore a new place and I would want to have a new experience at at the same.

✓ Well, I prefer views of other countries because I want to explore new places and have new experiences at the same time.

The original has unclear reference 'views of the country' vs question asking own country or other countries; likely 'other countries' is intended (word choice and sentence structure, ID 26). 'a new place' should be plural 'new places' to match general preference (singular/plural, ID 1). 'I would want to have a new experience at at the same' has duplicated 'at' and incorrect phrase; use 'have new experiences at the same time' or 'at the same time' (sentence structure and repetition error, ID 26). Suggestion: clarify intended meaning, remove duplicate words, and use parallel noun number and the fixed phrase 'at the same time'.