Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng chủ đề nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp, lặp từ và câu thiếu rõ ràng. Cụ thể: tránh lặp lại câu hỏi; dùng thì phù hợp (present perfect/ present simple); sửa lỗi phát âm/phiên âm không cần trong văn bản nhưng cần nói rõ ràng; rút gọn thành một câu chủ đề rồi thêm một đến hai chi tiết hỗ trợ. Ví dụ cấu trúc: I enjoy taking photos of different views. + lý do/ ví dụ ngắn. Hạn chế tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ (because, so, since) để liên kết ý.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I have been interested in photography since I was a child because I like capturing the atmosphere of a place. For example, I often take pictures when I travel to remember the scenery and mood.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời ngắn, không rõ ràng, có nhiều ngập ngừng và lỗi từ vựng ("remoting areas", "utterly" không phù hợp). Cần mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (I prefer...), sau đó giải thích lý do với từ vựng chính xác (rural areas / countryside / peaceful). Dùng liên từ như because hoặc so để nối ý và tránh tiếng ậm ừ. Thêm một ví dụ ngắn để chứng minh (e.g., I like taking photos of rice fields at sunset).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and more photogenic. For instance, I enjoy photographing rice fields and small villages at sunset since the light and colors are beautiful.

Sugestão: Ý chính rõ nhưng diễn đạt lủng củng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp/ cấu trúc ("taking me a big ride", "Vietnamese people landscape"). Cần nói trực tiếp: I prefer views in my own country because... và giải thích cụ thể (diverse landscapes, cultural scenes). Tránh dùng những thành ngữ không đúng; đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể nơi bạn muốn đến hoặc ảnh bạn muốn chụp. Giữ 2–3 câu súc tích, dùng linking words như because hoặc for example.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has very diverse and beautiful landscapes. For example, I love photographing Ha Long Bay and the terraced fields in Sapa, which show both natural beauty and local culture.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views? Actually I have. I have an avid interest of taking photos since I was a little kid, so I I have always been.

✓ Yes, I do. I have been very interested in taking photos since I was a little kid, and I always have been.

The original contains several sentence-structure and word-choice issues: 'Actually I have' is incomplete; 'an avid interest of taking photos' is incorrect collocation (use 'interested in' or 'an avid interest in'); repetition 'I I'; awkward clause 'so I I have always been.' The correction combines ideas into clear, grammatical sentences and uses the correct preposition 'interested in'. Suggestion: use complete clauses, avoid repetitions, and use correct collocations such as 'interested in' or 'have an interest in'.

× Do you prefer, do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas? Utterly. I really like enjoy the the atmosphere in remoting areas, uh, which I can take away from it all to.

✓ I prefer rural areas. I really enjoy the atmosphere in remote areas because I can get away from it all.

Problems: 'Utterly' is inappropriate as a one-word answer; 'I really like enjoy' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'the the' repeated; 'remoting' is incorrect form — should be 'remote'; phrase 'take away from it all to' is ungrammatical. The correction uses the adjective 'remote' correctly, removes redundancy, and provides a natural reason. Suggestion: choose one verb ('like' or 'enjoy'), check adjective forms, and avoid filler words.

× Yeah, actually I love my country a lot, so absolutely I really want to visit all places around my country. So taking me a big ride of the beauty of Vietnamese people landscape, yes.

✓ Yes, I love my country, so I really want to visit places around it to see the beauty of the Vietnamese landscape.

Issues: 'visit all places around my country' is awkward (use 'places around it' or 'around my country'); 'taking me a big ride of the beauty of Vietnamese people landscape' is ungrammatical and contains wrong noun phrases — 'Vietnamese people landscape' should be 'Vietnamese landscape' or 'the landscape of Vietnam'. The correction uses natural phrasing and correct noun forms. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct collocations ('the Vietnamese landscape'), and avoid direct translations of idioms like 'taking me a big ride'.