Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and natural phrasing, and avoid repetition. Link ideas with simple connectors like “when” or “so”.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I visit beautiful places, I always take photos to share with my family and friends and to post stories on social media. For example, last month I photographed a mountain sunset and shared it with my friends, who really liked it.

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatical answer and support it with clear, specific reasons. Avoid unclear words (e.g., “privacy” and “cloud”)—choose precise vocabulary like “peaceful,” “less crowded,” or “convenient.” Use linking words such as “because” and “so” correctly and keep sentences short.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because they are more convenient and often less crowded in the places I visit. For instance, I like taking photos on quiet city rooftops or parks where I can relax with family and capture skyline views without many people around.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific, well-phrased examples. Improve sentence structure and remove repetition. Mention one or two named places with a brief reason why you prefer them, using linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because India has many beautiful landscapes and cultural sites. For example, I enjoy the mountain scenery in Himachal Pradesh and the spiritual atmosphere around Kedarnath, so I often choose to travel within India to photograph these places.

× Yes, because taking picture is my different hobby when I was going something beautiful place or nowadays also when I visit something beautiful and different places, I definitely click a picture and showing my friends and families and putting a story in the social media.

✓ Yes, because taking pictures is my favourite hobby; when I go to a beautiful place now or in the past, I definitely take pictures, show them to my friends and family, and post them on social media.

Errors: incorrect noun form 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' after 'taking'; incorrect adjective 'different' used unnaturally; wrong tense and verb forms 'was going' should be 'go' for habitual action, 'click a picture' is informal and nonstandard — use 'take pictures'; 'showing' needs parallel verb form 'show' and 'putting a story' should be 'post'. Suggestion: use plural for general activities (taking pictures), use simple present for habitual actions, keep verbs parallel in a list, and choose standard verbs like 'take', 'show', 'post'.

× I want you to do the correction under following 5 steps:

✓ I want you to do the correction under the following five steps:

Missing definite article 'the' before 'following' and numbers in formal writing are better spelled out as words for clarity. Suggestion: include 'the' before 'following' and write 'five'.

× I prefer a view in a urban area because it is a privacy and not too much cloud at that place.

✓ I prefer views in an urban area because it is private and there are not many clouds there.

Errors: 'a view' should be plural 'views' to match general preference; 'a urban' incorrect article — before a vowel sound use 'an'; 'it is a privacy' incorrect noun usage — use adjective 'private'; 'not too much cloud' should be 'not many clouds' or 'few clouds'; missing 'there' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct articles, pluralize when speaking generally, choose adjective forms, and use countable noun form 'clouds' with 'many'.

× So taking a picture always in my phone.

✓ So I always have pictures on my phone.

Errors: 'taking a picture always in my phone' is ungrammatical and singular/plural mismatch; 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to refer to multiple images; missing subject and auxiliary. Suggestion: use 'I always have pictures on my phone' to convey possession of multiple images.

× when I was going something beautiful place

✓ when I went to a beautiful place

Errors: 'was going' + noun phrase awkward for past habitual action; missing preposition 'to' before 'place'; 'something beautiful place' incorrect word order — use 'a beautiful place'. Suggestion: use 'went to' for past visits or 'go to' for habitual present, include 'to' and correct word order.

× showing my friends and families

✓ show them to my friends and family

Errors: 'showing' needs to be 'show' to match parallel verbs; 'friends and families' is incorrect — 'family' is collective; pronoun 'them' clarifies what is being shown. Suggestion: use 'show them to my friends and family' for clarity and correct plurality.

× We enjoy with our friends and families and clicking a photo without any crowding.

✓ We enjoy time with our friends and family and take photos without any crowds.

Errors: 'enjoy with' should be 'enjoy time with' or 'enjoy being with'; 'families' should be singular collective 'family'; 'clicking a photo' nonstandard — use 'take photos'; 'crowding' wrong noun; use 'crowds'. Suggestion: use correct verb collocations ('enjoy time with'), collective nouns, standard verbs ('take photos') and correct plural nouns ('crowds').

× So I love to prefer views in the urban area.

✓ So I prefer views in urban areas.

Errors: redundant 'love to prefer' — choose one verb ('prefer'); 'the urban area' too specific, use plural 'urban areas' for general preference. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer views in urban areas'.

× So I love to prefer a view in my own country.

✓ So I prefer views in my own country.

Errors: 'love to prefer' is unidiomatic and mixes verbs; 'a view' should be plural 'views' for general preference. Suggestion: use 'I prefer' without 'love to' unless expressing stronger feeling: 'I love views in my own country.'

× I prefer view in my own country because in India there are so many beautiful places are there like a Kedarnath, Mandir, Himachal and so many like Pahadi Vista and so many things are available there.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because India has many beautiful places, such as Kedarnath, temples, Himachal Pradesh, and many scenic hill views.

Errors: redundant 'are there' and 'are available there'; missing articles and incorrect capitalization; 'a Kedarnath' wrong article; 'Mandir' (temple) should be 'temples' or specified; 'Pahadi Vista' odd phrase—use 'hill scenery' or 'scenic hill views'. Suggestion: remove redundancies, use concise structure 'India has many beautiful places, such as...', correct articles and nouns, and use standard English terms.