Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it has several grammatical errors, redundancy, and unclear phrases. Keep answers within 3–4 clear sentences: state a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Focus on correct verb forms, clearer vocabulary (e.g., “inspire me” → “inspires me”), and avoid vague phrases like “spend a lot of respect for this movement.”

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. It inspires me because I can capture moments that reflect daily life and emotions. For example, I often photograph sunsets and busy streets, which remind me how vibrant life can be.

Sugestão: Your response answers the question but contains awkward phrasing, grammar mistakes, and unnecessary repetition. Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons and examples connected with linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “so”). Correct prepositions and articles (e.g., “similar to me” → “familiar to me”; “get the pictures downed” → “take pictures of”). Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I live in the city and they are more familiar to me. For example, I like photographing bridges, busy streets and reflections on river water. These scenes are easy to access and show the energy of city life.

Sugestão: You give a reasonable answer but use unclear expressions and some grammar errors. Give a direct topic sentence (“I like both”), then two concise supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “beautiful size” and unnecessary moral statements (“you must respect that”). Use specific examples of types of scenes you enjoy in different countries.

Exemplo: I like views in both my country and others because each place offers unique scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing traditional architecture at home and coastal landscapes abroad. Visiting a country lets you capture its signature scenes and cultural atmosphere.

× Personally, I love taking pictures of different views a lot.

✓ Personally, I love taking pictures of different views.

The original repeats intensity with 'a lot' which is unnecessary and creates awkwardness. Remove 'a lot' to make the sentence concise and natural. Use simple adverb placement after the verb phrase: 'love taking pictures' suffices.

× It's kind of a part of my life that I can live without it and deep in my heart is inspire me a lot and gives me a sense of what life go on.

✓ It's a part of my life that I cannot live without; deep in my heart it inspires me a lot and gives me a sense of how life goes on.

Multiple errors: incorrect negation and redundancy ('can live without it' should be 'cannot live without'); pronoun and clause problems ('deep in my heart is inspire me' should be 'it inspires me'); verb form and subject-verb agreement ('what life go on' should be 'how life goes on'). Suggest restructuring into two clauses and use correct verb forms and agreement.

× And I also spend a lot of respect for this movement from here.

✓ I also have a lot of respect for this experience.

'Spend a lot of respect' is incorrect collocation; 'respect' is not 'spent'. 'Movement from here' is unclear; likely 'experience' or 'this activity' fits. Use proper verb-noun collocation: 'have respect for'.

× Currently I live in the city so I often take a picture of the urban areas because it's a similar to me and I often spend time and it's easy to me to get the pictures downed like the wheels or the bridge in the river.

✓ Currently I live in the city, so I often take pictures of urban areas because they are familiar to me. I spend time there, and it's easy for me to get shots of things like wheels or a bridge over the river.

Several issues: pluralization ('take a picture' -> 'take pictures'); incorrect adjective use ('it's a similar to me' -> 'they are familiar to me'); phrasing and preposition errors ('easy to me' -> 'easy for me'); wrong past form 'downed' should be 'shots' or 'photos' and use 'bridge over the river'. Correct verb forms, plural nouns, and prepositions.

× Everything is making me love the life more.

✓ Everything makes me love life more.

Use simple present 'makes' for habitual effect (subject-verb agreement) and drop the article 'the' before 'life' unless specified. 'Making me love' is awkward; 'makes me love' is natural.

× To be honest, I definitely prefer both because it's actually, I believe that each country has its beautiful size and scenes.

✓ To be honest, I prefer both because I believe that each country has its own beautiful sights and scenes.

Awkward filler words and incorrect noun choice: 'size' is wrong here—use 'sights'. Insert possessive 'its own' for clarity and remove redundant phrases 'it's actually'. Ensure word choice matches meaning.

× So you must respect that.

✓ So you should respect that.

'Must' conveys obligation and is too strong in this conversational context; 'should' is a softer recommendation appropriate for opinion.

× And I think if you have chance to visit a country, you would know the signature scenes of that country and you would love them so much.

✓ I think if you have the chance to visit a country, you will see its iconic scenes and you will love them.

Missing article 'the' before 'chance'. Use future simple 'will' to express likely result rather than 'would' which implies hypothetical. 'Signature scenes' is awkward—'iconic scenes' or 'landmarks' is more natural. Simplify repetition.

× And it's kind of like the specific things that.

✓ It's kind of like those specific things.

Sentence fragment and awkward phrasing. Replace with 'those specific things' to complete the thought and match reference to previously mentioned items.