Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on natural expressions such as “I enjoy taking photos when I travel because…” and explain what you enjoy (memories, sharing, creativity).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel. I like capturing landscapes and local scenes because they help me remember the place and share my experiences with friends. For example, I often photograph sunsets or traditional architecture to show how each place is unique.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clear vocabulary: state your preference with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons linked by words like “because” or “because of.” Avoid mispronounced or incorrect words (e.g. ‘rhymes’ → ‘rural’).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the air is cleaner and the scenery is more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy open fields and hills where I can see nature without factories or heavy traffic nearby.

Sugestão: Give a clear, structured response: say your preference, then give specific reasons with linking words like “because” or “so.” Use correct sentence forms and avoid repetition. Mention a concrete example of a country or type of view you like abroad to add detail.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because, in my experience, they often have cleaner environments and more attractive landscapes. For example, I would like to visit America for its national parks and wide open spaces, which I think are better for my health and enjoyment.

× Yes, I like taking pictures when I gone to the different place always I'm I'm taking pictures because it is a enjoyed me and it's really assigns all my love and so why is not?

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures when I go to different places. I always take pictures because I enjoy it and it shows my love for them.

Multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect verb forms ('gone' should be 'go' for habitual action - present tense), wrong word order and extra words ('the different place' -> 'different places'), incorrect passive/active use ('it is a enjoyed me' -> 'I enjoy it'), and unclear phrase ('assigns all my love' -> 'shows my love'). Suggestion: break long run-on into clear sentences, use simple present for habits, and choose correct verb forms and direct expressions.

× I prefer rhymes. It's rural areas because it's so very clear and urban areas it's so we can there is a factory and it's not for clear areas. It's do it so bad areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the air is much clearer. In urban areas there are many factories and cars, so the air is not as clean.

Errors include wrong word choice ('rhymes' instead of 'rural'), incorrect adjectives and unclear phrases ('so very clear' needs a noun 'air' and comparative structure), and broken sentence structure. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('rural'), specify what is clearer (air), and use correct constructions to compare urban and rural areas.

× I prefer is the owner not my own countries, a preppers other countries because it's my my own countries. We can't do it. So factory and the many cars it's not Hells my it's not help my health and not goods and I prefers other countries. It is maybe also America.

✓ I prefer other countries to my own because in my country there are many factories and cars that harm the air and my health. I prefer other countries, maybe the United States.

Many structural and grammar issues: incorrect phrases ('is the owner not my own countries'), wrong verb forms ('preppers' should be 'prefer', 'prefers' wrong form), article and plural errors, and unclear ideas. Correction clarifies comparison and reason using proper subject-verb agreement and relative clauses ('that harm the air and my health'). Suggestion: use simple comparative phrasing 'prefer A to B', maintain subject-verb agreement, and keep sentences concise.