Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "views" and "scenery" used repeatedly) and fix tense/structure errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I photograph landmarks and natural scenes so I can look back on the memories; this helps me remember the atmosphere and details of each place.

Sugestão: Good structure and relevant details, but check word choice and a small vocabulary error ('pistol' is incorrect). Use a linking word to connect reasons and give one concrete example of a photograph you take.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside’s lush greenery and open fields are calming. For instance, I often photograph sunrise over a field to capture the soft light and peaceful atmosphere, which helps me compose tranquil images.

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence cohesion. Start with a direct answer, then use a linking word to offer specific examples of what attracts you abroad. Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid vague phrasing.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because different places offer unique landscapes and cultures. For example, I enjoy photographing coastal cliffs in Portugal and mountain ranges in Japan because their textures and light are very different from what I see at home.

× I do enjoy taking photos of different views because I love reminiscing the scenery and the views that I just visit the place and I for example, I just take a travel around the world.

✓ I enjoy taking photos of different views because I love looking back at the scenery from places I have visited; for example, when I travel around the world I like to look back at the photos I took.

Problems: Present tense issue (6) and Verb + -ing form (8): 'do enjoy' is unnecessary emphatic; simply 'I enjoy' is more natural. 'Reminiscing the scenery' is incorrect collocation; use 'looking back at the scenery'. Sentence structure errors (26): sentence is run-on and contains redundancy ('the views that I just visit the place' is ungrammatical). Also 'I just take a travel around the world' is incorrect: use 'when I travel around the world' and match tense with 'I took' or 'I have taken'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct preposition 'look back at', and use appropriate verb tense ('have visited' for completed experiences or 'travel' for general habit).

× The lush greenery and open fields are very calming.

✓ The lush greenery and open fields are very calming.

No correction needed for grammar; sentence is correct. It uses plural nouns appropriately and the adjective 'lush' correctly modifies 'greenery'. This entry is included to indicate no error detected relevant to the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List.

× I also enjoy taking photographs there since the fresh air and pistol atmosphere makes it easy to relax and capture beautiful moments.

✓ I also enjoy taking photographs there because the fresh air and peaceful atmosphere make it easy to relax and capture beautiful moments.

Problems: Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (13) and Subject-verb agreement (27). 'Pistol atmosphere' is a wrong word; likely intended 'peaceful' or 'pleasant'. Also 'fresh air and peaceful atmosphere' is a compound subject (plural) so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjective and ensure verb agrees with compound subjects.

× I have lived in this country for most of my life, so I enjoy exploring views abroad.

✓ I have lived in this country for most of my life, so I enjoy exploring views abroad.

No grammatical correction needed: Present perfect 'have lived' correctly indicates experience up to now, and 'enjoy exploring' correctly expresses present preference. Included to show it meets the Grammar_Problem_Type_List criteria (no error).

× I like looking at landscapes from other countries because there are different cultures and natural scenery like coastal cliffs or mountain ranges seems very beautiful and interesting to me.

✓ I like looking at landscapes from other countries because there are different cultures and natural scenery, such as coastal cliffs or mountain ranges, which seem very beautiful and interesting to me.

Problems: Subject-verb agreement (27) and Sentence structure errors (26). The relative clause '...coastal cliffs or mountain ranges seems...' is incorrect because the plural subject 'coastal cliffs or mountain ranges' requires 'seem' not 'seems'. Also the sentence needs clearer punctuation or a relative pronoun ('which') to connect 'natural scenery' and the descriptive clause. Suggestion: use 'such as' to introduce examples and 'which seem' for the descriptive clause; ensure plural verbs for plural nouns.