Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, avoid filler words, and add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, say you take photos on your phone and explain briefly why or how you try different views.

Exemplo: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. I usually use my phone because it’s convenient, and I experiment with different angles and lighting so I can capture my favorite shots.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference sentence, use correct tense, reduce hesitations, and add a specific reason with linking words. Mention a concrete example of a rural scene that relaxes you.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery. For example, I love wide fields and quiet rivers, which make me feel relaxed and calm after a busy week.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, correct vocabulary and sentence structure, avoid repetition, and give a specific reason or example. State you prefer views in your country and name particular landscapes you appreciate, with a linking word to explain why.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide variety of landscapes. For instance, there are tall mountains and large rivers that I haven’t explored yet, so I enjoy discovering different scenery at home.

× Yes, and I taking picture on my phones when I, I, I want to take her, uh, my favorite pictures.

✓ Yes, and I take pictures on my phone when I want to take my favorite pictures.

The original uses 'I taking' which is incorrect verb form; a finite verb is needed. This is error type 8 (Verb + -ing form) because the -ing form was used instead of the simple present. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' and 'phones' should be singular 'phone' for naturalness. Suggestion: use the simple present 'I take' for habitual actions and match singular/plural nouns appropriately.

× I will try many different views to take my favorite pictures.

✓ I try many different views to take my favorite pictures.

The sentence uses 'I will try' which contrasts with the present habitual context. This is a present tense issue (type 6). For a general habit, use simple present 'I try'. If the speaker intended a future plan, 'I will try' could be correct, but in context of describing usual behavior, use 'I try'.

× Uh, when I was a younger, uh, I like open area because I haven't seen the urban area before.

✓ When I was younger, I liked open areas because I hadn't seen urban areas before.

Multiple tense problems: 'was a younger' is ungrammatical; 'younger' should pair with 'was' without 'a'. 'I like' should be past 'I liked' to match 'When I was younger' (past reference). 'haven't seen' should be past perfect 'hadn't seen' because it refers to a time before that past. This matches type 5 (Past tense issue). Suggestion: keep tense consistent when referring to past periods.

× And now I like the rural areas.

✓ Now I like rural areas.

Article use with 'rural areas' is unnecessary; this is principally a present tense statement but also involves article choice (type 6). Use simple present 'I like' for current preference and omit 'the' for general plural nouns: 'I like rural areas.'

× I like the natural scenery more, yes.

✓ I prefer natural scenery.

Sentence uses 'I like the natural scenery more' which is awkward; change to 'I prefer natural scenery' to clearly state current preference. This is a present tense/word choice issue (type 6). Omit 'the' for general idea.

× And the natural scenery made me, uh, very relaxed.

✓ Natural scenery makes me very relaxed.

The original uses past 'made' but the context is a general truth about effect; use simple present 'makes' for habitual or general effects (type 6). Also remove filler 'the' at the start for naturalness.

× Yes, I prefer wheels in my countries because my country has many, many different views and in the world, but without one view.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in my country because my country has many different landscapes that I haven't seen elsewhere in the world.

This sentence has multiple problems: 'wheels' is a wrong word for 'views' (lexical error) and 'my countries' should be singular 'my country'. The phrase 'but without one view' is unclear. This is primarily incorrect use of pronouns/words and sentence structure (type 12 and 26). I corrected to 'views in my country' and clarified meaning: 'many different landscapes that I haven't seen elsewhere in the world.' Suggestion: use 'country' singular and precise vocabulary like 'views' or 'landscapes.'

× And so my country has a lot of will I haven't seen because the mountain and the river, big river and the and the and so many.

✓ My country has many places I haven't seen, such as mountains and large rivers.

Original is very fragmented and ungrammatical with repetition and unclear words ('will'). This is a sentence structure error (type 26). I reorganized into a clear sentence: 'My country has many places I haven't seen, such as mountains and large rivers.' Suggestion: plan the sentence with subject + verb + object and use examples introduced by 'such as' to list features.