Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy, reduce redundancy, and organise the answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'taking' → 'take', 'click' → 'take' or 'photograph'), remove repeated words, and avoid vague phrases like 'a best picture' or 'because it's happened once in a blue moon' unless you clarify meaning. Add a linking phrase before the example (e.g., 'for example') and keep the answer to no more than four sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, I often take pictures of the sky, especially at sunrise or sunset, and occasionally I capture rainbows when the light is right. I try to compose each shot carefully to highlight colours and patterns.

Sugestão: Work on grammar (article and plural use), sentence variety, and coherence. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (because, so, therefore). Avoid vague claims like 'I did not capture very good views' — instead describe why urban views are less appealing. Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside is quieter and less polluted than the city. As a result, I can photograph open fields and forests with clear light, which makes colours and details stand out. Therefore I usually go to rural areas when I want better landscape photos.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct grammar, give clearer specific details and avoid repetition. Start with a concise topic sentence ('I prefer views in my own country') and support it with a specific, well-structured example: location name, distance, and what makes it special. Fix errors ('places', '300 kilometres', 'the place is called Saputara') and avoid imprecise claims like 'rainbow are frequently shown'—describe conditions when rainbows appear.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many picturesque places. For example, about 300 kilometres from my hometown is a hill station called Saputara, known for its mountains and misty valleys; after rain, the sunlight often creates vivid rainbows over the slopes, which makes great photos.

× Yes, I love to taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views.

Use the gerund after 'love' without the infinitive marker 'to'. 'Love taking' is correct; 'to taking' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: say 'I love taking...'.

× For an example I mostly click picture of a sky and sometimes when I saw rainbow because it's happened once in a blue moon.

✓ For example, I mostly take pictures of the sky and sometimes I see a rainbow because it happens once in a blue moon.

Multiple issues: 'For an example' should be 'For example'. 'click picture of a sky' is unnatural; use 'take pictures of the sky' and plural 'pictures'. 'when I saw rainbow' mixes tenses and misses an article; use present 'when I see a rainbow'. 'it's happened' is incorrect tense and auxiliary; use 'it happens'. Suggestions: use 'For example, I mostly take pictures of the sky and sometimes I see a rainbow because it happens once in a blue moon.'

× So definitely I try my best to capture a best picture of the different views.

✓ So I definitely try my best to capture the best picture of different views.

Article misuse: 'a best picture' should be 'the best picture' (superlative needs 'the'). 'the different views' is unnatural here; use 'different views' or 'various views'. Also word order: 'I definitely' is more natural than 'definitely I'.

× Well, I prefer views in a rural areas because in urban areas there is lots of noise as well as pollution.

✓ Well, I prefer views in rural areas because in urban areas there is lots of noise and pollution.

Article misuse: 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'rural areas' without 'a'. Also 'as well as' is acceptable but 'and' is simpler. Consider subject-verb agreement with 'there is' vs 'there are' (see next).

× So I did not capture very good views.

✓ So I do not capture very good views.

Tense inconsistency and auxiliary: the context is general preference, so present simple 'do not capture' is appropriate rather than past 'did not capture'. Use 'do not' for negative present. Also 'very good views' is acceptable but 'good views' is more natural.

× In a rural areas there are lots of greenery as well as the clear environment so I can explore the beauty of nature.

✓ In rural areas there is a lot of greenery and a clearer environment, so I can explore the beauty of nature.

Article and number issues: 'a rural areas' incorrect; use 'In rural areas'. 'lots of greenery' is fine but 'a lot of greenery' is more common. 'the clear environment' should be 'a clearer environment' to compare with urban areas. Also punctuation: add a comma before 'so'.

× To be honest I prefer views in my own country because in my country there are lots of place which capture really eye-catching views.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in my own country because there are lots of places that have really eye-catching scenery.

Plural and article: 'lots of place' should be 'lots of places'. 'which capture really eye-catching views' is awkward; use 'that have really eye-catching scenery' or 'that offer eye-catching views'. Added comma after introductory phrase.

× For an example around 300 kilometer from my hometown, one location which which name is Saputara.

✓ For example, about 300 kilometres from my hometown there is a place called Saputara.

Preposition and phrasing: 'around 300 kilometer from' should be 'about 300 kilometres from' (plural and 'about' preferred). 'one location which which name is Saputara' is ungrammatical; use 'a place called Saputara' or 'a location named Saputara'. Removed duplicate 'which'.

× It is very famous for mountains and the rainbow are frequently shown over there.

✓ It is very famous for its mountains, and rainbows frequently appear there.

Grammar and agreement: 'the rainbow are' is incorrect number agreement; use plural 'rainbows' or 'a rainbow' with singular verb. 'are frequently shown over there' is passive and awkward; use active 'rainbows frequently appear there'. Also add possessive 'its mountains'.