Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Работайте над беглостью и устранением заполнителей («uh», «um»). Старайтесь давать более связный ответ с одной-двумя уточняющими деталями — например, объясните, какие виды вам нравятся и почему, а также упомяните, как вы решаете проблему с плохой техникой. Используйте более точную лексику (camera, phone, quality, edit) и сократите ответ до 2–3 предложений без лишних пауз.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially city skylines and coastal scenes because they have strong shapes and colours. However, I usually use my mother's camera since my phone and my own camera are low quality, so I often edit photos afterwards to improve them.

Sugestão: Убедитесь, что структура ответа ясна: начните с прямого утверждения предпочтения, затем добавьте 1–2 связных причины, используя связки (for example, because, however). Удаляйте заполнители и повторения. Давайте более конкретные детали (какие здания, какие виды ландшафта) и используйте разнообразную лексику (urban skyline, historic architecture, rolling hills, mountain ranges).

Exemplo: I prefer urban views for their dramatic skylines and historic architecture because tall buildings create interesting shapes. However, I also enjoy rural scenes like rolling hills and mountain ranges for their peaceful atmosphere and natural colours.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте точный топик-сентенс: ясно скажите своё предпочтение. Дайте конкретные причины и примеры (удобство, знакомство с местами, лучшие ракурсы), используйте связующие слова (because, since, for example) и избегайте повторов («my country» много раз). Это улучшит логичность и выразительность речи.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and feel more comfortable exploring them. For example, I can visit well-known historic buildings early in the morning to avoid crowds and capture better light.

× However, uh, I haven't uh, good phone to take a picture and my camera is not good.

✓ However, I don't have a good phone to take pictures and my camera is not good.

The student used 'I haven't' incorrectly with a noun; in English we use 'have' as a main verb with articles: 'I don't have a good phone.' Also 'a picture' should be plural or omitted when speaking generally: 'take pictures.' Suggestion: use 'I don't have a good phone' and 'take pictures' for general activities.

× Uh but uh, I always take a picture from my mother.

✓ But I always take pictures for my mother.

The original 'take a picture from my mother' is unclear and uses the preposition 'from' incorrectly. If the student means making photos on behalf of their mother, use 'for my mother.' If they meant 'with' (with mother's help), use 'with my mother.' Suggestion: choose the correct preposition depending on meaning: 'for' or 'with.'

× On the one hand, I prefer views in urban areas because, and there are a few, uh, buildings, uh, to take a picture or, uh, looking at the, looking at them,

✓ On the one hand, I prefer views in urban areas because there are many interesting buildings to photograph and to look at.

Problems: unnecessary 'and' after 'because', awkward word order 'there are a few' (means small number) and incorrect verb forms 'to take a picture or looking at'. Use 'many' or 'a lot of' instead of 'a few' if positive, and parallel infinitives 'to photograph and to look at' or 'to photograph and look at.' Suggestion: restructure sentence for clarity and correct prepositions/verb forms.

× On the other hand, uh, I like, uh, rural areas because of the mountains and, uh, the landscape.

✓ On the other hand, I like rural areas because of the mountains and the landscape.

Main issues: extra filler words 'uh' and unnecessary commas; grammar is otherwise acceptable. Suggestion: remove fillers and keep 'the mountains and the landscape.'

× Even if in my country there are a lot of historic buildings, uh, I will prefer views in my own country because of, uh, it's my, uh, well known country.

✓ Even though my country has many historic buildings, I prefer views in my own country because it is my well-known country.

'Even if' is not the best connector here; 'even though' or 'although' expresses contrast. 'There are a lot of historic buildings' is acceptable but 'my country has many historic buildings' is more natural. 'I will prefer' is incorrect for a general preference; use present simple 'I prefer.' 'Because of, it's my well known country' mixes structures; use 'because it is my well-known country.' Suggestion: use present simple for general preferences and correct connectors.

× I can use, uh, all of the possibilities and this is my own country.

✓ I can use all the opportunities here, and this is my own country.

'All of the possibilities' is awkward; 'opportunities' or 'possibilities' without 'all of the' is better. Also add 'here' to clarify location and join with 'and.' Suggestion: prefer 'opportunities' and concise phrasing.