Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than take photos because I rarely look back at them later. For example, when I travel I focus on the experience itself instead of photographing every view.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and then provide a specific reason with a linking word. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'allergic' not 'allergy') and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas because I'm allergic to many things found in nature. For example, insects and pollen usually trigger my allergies, so I feel more comfortable in a city environment.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct tense and linking words. Give one specific detail or short example to support your answer. Keep it concise and natural (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I get excited by new environments. For instance, I enjoy discovering different architectures and local cultures when I travel abroad.

× Actually I don't like taking photos in of different views because after taking photos it's really for me to look it back.

✓ Actually I don't like taking photos of different views because after taking photos it's really hard for me to look back at them.

The phrase 'taking photos in of different views' has an extra preposition; use 'of' only. 'Look it back' is incorrect: 'look back at them' uses the noun 'them' for photos and the correct prepositional verb 'look back at'. Also 'really hard for me' fits the meaning and grammar.

× Actually I don't like taking photos in of different views because after taking photos it's really for me to look it back.

✓ Actually I don't like taking photos of different views because after taking photos it's really hard for me to look back at them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect for referring to plural 'photos'; use 'them'. Also the verb phrase 'look back at' requires the preposition 'at'. This correction ensures pronoun number agreement and correct verb-preposition collocation.

× So that's why I think I would rather enjoy the moment.

✓ So that's why I think I would rather enjoy the moment.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. No change needed. It correctly expresses preference using 'would rather' plus base verb. Included here to show it fits the expected structure.

× I prefer urban area 'cause I so easy to get allergy in the natural environment.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I easily get allergies in natural environments.

'Urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'So easy to get allergy' is ungrammatical: use 'easily get allergies' or 'am prone to allergies'. 'Allergy' should be plural when referring to occurrences generally. 'In the natural environment' can be more natural as 'in natural environments'.

× I prefer urban area 'cause I so easy to get allergy in the natural environment.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I easily get allergies in natural environments.

The original lacks a subject-verb structure 'I so easy to get allergy'. Replace with 'I easily get allergies' which has correct subject 'I' and verb 'get' and appropriate adverb 'easily'. This fixes pronoun and verb usage.

× For example, every insect that I meet would make me get the allergy reflection.

✓ For example, every insect I encounter makes me have an allergic reaction.

'The allergy reflection' is incorrect. Use 'an allergic reaction' to describe the response. Also 'meet' is better as 'encounter' for insects, and 'would make me get' is awkward; use simple present 'makes me have' for habitual situations.

× For example, every insect that I meet would make me get the allergy reflection.

✓ For example, every insect I encounter makes me have an allergic reaction.

The verb phrase 'would make me get' is incorrect for a habitual fact; use simple present 'makes me have'. Also 'allergic reaction' is the correct noun phrase. Present participle forms are not necessary here.

× So yeah.

✓ So yeah.

This utterance is informal but grammatically fine as a short response; no correction needed.

× Umm I prefer views in other countries cause I'm the kind of person who would feel excited when I in a new environment, so I spent a lot of time out travelling in different countries to.

✓ Umm I prefer views in other countries because I'm the kind of person who feels excited when I'm in a new environment, so I spend a lot of time travelling in different countries.

Missing preposition 'in' after 'when I' was omitted; correct form is 'when I'm in a new environment'. 'Cause' should be 'because' in semi-formal speech. Tense consistency: use present simple 'I spend' for habitual actions rather than past 'I spent'. Remove unnecessary 'out' and trailing 'to'. Also use contraction 'I'm' and include 'travelling' spelling consistent with British English.

× Umm I prefer views in other countries cause I'm the kind of person who would feel excited when I in a new environment, so I spent a lot of time out travelling in different countries to.

✓ Umm I prefer views in other countries because I'm the kind of person who feels excited when I'm in a new environment, so I spend a lot of time travelling in different countries.

The original mixes past and modal forms incorrectly for a habitual preference. Use present simple 'feels' and 'I spend' to express regular behaviour. Also include the missing auxiliary 'am' in 'when I'm in'. This ensures tense consistency and grammatical completeness.