Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify your main idea in one clear topic sentence, correct fragmented sentences, and use specific vocabulary. Avoid unrelated or incorrect words (e.g., “virtual bears”). Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use a linking phrase if you add details.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different landscapes. For example, I often photograph natural scenery in Japan because I love its mountains, forests and coastal views. These scenes feel peaceful and inspiring, so I usually spend a few hours capturing them on weekends.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and connect ideas with linking words. Fix grammar (verb tenses, articles) and remove small fragments. Keep it coherent and within five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy wide-open landscapes and fresh air. For instance, I love admiring majestic mountains and the nearby sea, which help me relax after a busy week. Also, rural places tend to be quieter, so I can unwind and focus on photography.

Sugestão: Give a clear answer (own country or other countries) in the first sentence, then support with specific examples and linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and incorrect word order. Mention one or two concrete reasons and keep the response concise.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially Mediterranean towns in Europe. For example, the harbours and traditional houses in places like Greece and Italy are very picturesque, with colorful buildings and narrow streets that are great for photography.

× I like to. Take pictures of different virtual bears, I love their. Japanese scenery of nature.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views; I love Japanese natural scenery.

The original contains fragmented sentences and incorrect words 'virtual bears' and 'their.' This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Combine fragments into one coherent sentence using the gerund 'taking' to fit the question. Replace 'virtual bears' (nonsense here) with 'views' to match context and change 'Japanese scenery of nature' to the more natural phrase 'Japanese natural scenery.' Use a semicolon or conjunction to link related ideas.

× I'd prefer the views in rural areas because I love admiring their majestic mountains and the sea. The peaceful scenery of and fresh air helped me relax and after a busy week.

✓ I'd prefer views in rural areas because I love admiring the majestic mountains and the sea. The peaceful scenery and fresh air help me relax after a busy week.

There are two issues: incorrect possessive pronoun 'their' and tense/agreement problems. First, 'their majestic mountains' is incorrect when referring generally; use 'the majestic mountains' (ID 12 pronoun error combined with 26). Second, 'helped me relax and after a busy week' is ungrammatical and mixes past with general habit. Use present simple 'help me relax' to indicate a habitual effect (ID 8: verb + -ing and ID 6: present tense). Remove the extra 'of' and place 'after a busy week' at the end for clarity.

× I love the beautiful townscapes in European. Mediterranean harbours country. The traditional houses are so beautiful.

✓ I love the beautiful townscapes in European Mediterranean harbour towns; the traditional houses are so beautiful.

Original phrases are broken and use incorrect prepositions and word order. 'In European. Mediterranean harbours country.' is ungrammatical. Correct by using the adjective 'European Mediterranean' to modify 'harbour towns' and use the plural 'harbour towns' or 'harbours' depending on meaning. This fixes preposition and sentence structure errors (ID 11 and 26). Also combine into a single coherent sentence; ensure noun forms agree and word order is natural.