Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha net ve akıcı olmalı; belirsiz ifadeler ve dilbilgisi hataları azaltılmalı. Konuya doğrudan cevap verip 2–3 destekleyici cümle kullan, bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) ekle ve yanlış kelimeleri düzelt (ör. “ribs” yerine “places” veya “angles”, “up roads” yerine “crowded streets”/“open roads” gibi). Ayrıca tense ve pronoun hatalarını düzelt (ör. "I'm don't know" → "I don't know").

Exemplo: I do enjoy taking pictures of different views, but it depends on my mood. For example, I often prefer photographing unfamiliar places because I feel more relaxed when nobody knows me. Because I don’t feel observed, I can experiment more with angles and composition.

Sugestão: Cevap çelişkili ve karışık ifadeler içeriyor ("urban" ve "inside of nature" çakışması). Net bir tercih belirt ve nedenleri açıkla; bağlaçlarla mantıksal akış kur. Ayrıca daha uygun kelimeler kullan (ör. "refresh my mind", "relieve stress"). Cümle sayısını 3–4 ile sınırlı tut.

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas because they offer diverse scenes and interesting architecture. Photographing city life refreshes my mind and helps me relieve stress. For instance, I enjoy capturing busy streets and colorful buildings that inspire new ideas.

Sugestão: Cümleler belirsiz ve gramer hataları var ("un-knowledge" yerine "unknown", "wanna" yerine "want to" gibi). Soruya doğrudan cevap ver (own country or other countries), ardından kısa bir sebep ve bir örnek ekle. Daha resmi ve doğru kelime seçimi kullan.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in other countries because I enjoy exploring unknown places. Traveling abroad gives me fresh perspectives and new subjects to photograph. For example, I once photographed a market in a foreign city and discovered textures and colors I never see at home.

× It depends on my mood but usually I prefer taking photos from a different ribs right?

✓ It depends on my mood, but usually I prefer taking photos from different places, right?

The phrase 'from a different ribs' is ungrammatical and likely a wrong word choice. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Use a noun that fits context: 'places' or 'angles'. Also add a comma before 'but' when joining two independent clauses and add 'right?' at the end correctly. Suggested improvement: replace incorrect word with context-appropriate noun and punctuate clauses correctly.

× Umm But usually up roads make me feel more confident while I am taking photos because I feel like nobody knows me and I'm don't know anything about the space.

✓ But usually remote roads make me feel more confident while I am taking photos because I feel like nobody knows me and I don't know anything about the place.

Several present tense and word choice errors: 'up roads' is incorrect — use 'remote roads' or 'quiet roads'. 'I'm don't know' is incorrect combination; use 'I don't know'. 'space' is an odd choice; use 'place' or 'area'. Maintain present continuous 'I am taking' which is correct. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and use correct negative present form 'I don't'.

× So I feel like I supposed to be experienced this way so I feel more free while I'm taking pictures in abroad.

✓ So I feel like I am supposed to have this experience, so I feel freer while I'm taking pictures abroad.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'am' with 'supposed to' and incorrect tense for 'experience' — use 'have this experience' or 'be experienced' depending on meaning. 'Experienced' used as adjective here is wrong. 'in abroad' is ungrammatical; correct preposition is 'abroad'. Also use comparative 'freer' instead of 'more free'. Suggestion: use 'I am supposed to have this experience' and 'abroad' without a preposition.

× I think urban areas are more beneficial for my mind because I can clean my mind while I'm taking those photos, you know, they're feeling inside of nature, make me feel clean and make me feel out of stress.

✓ I think urban areas are better for my mind because they help me clear my mind while I'm taking photos; being surrounded by nature makes me feel refreshed and less stressed.

Preposition and collocation errors: 'beneficial for my mind' is acceptable but 'better for my mind' is more natural. 'clean my mind' is incorrect collocation; use 'clear my mind'. 'they're feeling inside of nature' is ungrammatical; use 'being surrounded by nature'. 'make me feel out of stress' is incorrect phrase; use 'less stressed' or 'relieved'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'clear my mind' and 'less stressed'.

× As I told you before, I prefer our world's pictures and our world views more due to the feeling of unknowledge.

✓ As I told you before, I prefer pictures and views from other countries because I like the feeling of not knowing what to expect.

Phrase 'our world's pictures and our world views' is awkward and unclear. 'Unknowledge' is not a correct noun — use 'not knowing' or 'uncertainty'. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Suggestion: simplify to 'pictures and views from other countries' and rephrase 'feeling of not knowing'.

× So I just wanna feel to experience so I feel abroad rather than my own country.

✓ So I just want to experience that, so I prefer being abroad rather than in my own country.

Colloquial 'wanna' should be 'want to'. 'feel to experience' is ungrammatical; use 'want to experience'. 'I feel abroad' is incorrect — use 'I prefer being abroad' or 'I feel better abroad'. Missing preposition 'in' before 'my own country'. Suggestion: use 'want to' and correct verb phrases and prepositions.