Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your response. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, yeah), correct unclear phrases ("if we scroll"), and give one or two specific examples with linking words. Aim for 2–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., landscape, scenery, panoramic).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes and city skylines when I travel, and I also take selfies that include the background scenery. I especially like capturing panoramic shots from high viewpoints because they show more detail and atmosphere.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitation and inaccurate adjectives ("creamy" is incorrect here). Provide a specific reason and an example using a linking word (e.g., "because", "for instance"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences. Use precise vocabulary like tranquil, serene, countryside.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are calm and peaceful. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet fields and traditional houses in my village, which helps me capture a relaxed atmosphere that you rarely find in busy cities.

Sugestão: Avoid vague phrases ("this is tough", "kinda give me something new to my eyes"). State your preference clearly and explain why with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words ("because", "for example") and stronger vocabulary like novel, different, fresh perspective.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new and different landscapes. For example, seeing coastal cliffs or ancient architecture abroad gives me a fresh perspective and inspiration for my photography.

× I love taking pictures of different views, especially when we go outside like if we scroll.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views, especially when we go outside to stroll.

The original uses 'scroll' which is incorrect in this context; 'stroll' (verb -ing form not required here) fits meaning of walking outside. This is a vocabulary error rather than a pure grammar form, but it involves incorrect verb choice. Use 'to stroll' after 'go outside' to express purpose. Ensure verb form matches infinitive after 'go outside to...'.

× I love taking pictures of everything, especially umm like a selfie of my face and the view from the from outside the car yeah I.

✓ I love taking pictures of everything, especially a selfie of my face with the view outside the car.

The original sentence is disfluent and contains repetition ('from the from') and filler words. This is a sentence structure error; remove repeated words and fillers and reorder for clarity: 'a selfie of my face with the view outside the car.'

× Personally, I love uh rural areas.

✓ Personally, I love rural areas.

The filler 'uh' is not grammatical; removing it yields a clear sentence. The verb 'love' is correctly followed by the noun phrase, so this is mainly a style/structure issue classified under verb + -ing because preceding examples involved -ing forms; however the needed fix is deletion of filler for grammatical clarity.

× I prefer rural areas because of the creamy, calm and peaceful side of rural areas and I live in the rural place here in.

✓ I prefer rural areas because of their calm and peaceful atmosphere, and I live in a rural area here.

'Creamy' is incorrect to describe an area; it's an adjective used for texture or taste. Replacing with 'calm and peaceful' and changing 'side of rural areas' to 'atmosphere' improves meaning. Also change 'the rural place' to 'a rural area' for natural phrasing. This fixes adjective misuse and article problems.

× I live in the rural place here in.

✓ I live in a rural area here.

The phrase 'the rural place' is unnatural and missing an article 'in' is left hanging; use 'a rural area' with the indefinite article and complete the clause. This fixes article and sentence completion issues.

× This is tough. Personally I prefer views in other countries because it kinda give me something new to my eyes.

✓ This is tough. Personally, I prefer views in other countries because they kind of give me something new for my eyes.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'it kinda give' is incorrect. 'Views' is plural, so use 'they' and 'give' (plural verb). Also 'kinda' is colloquial; 'kind of' is preferable in speaking but keep 'kind of' as two words. Use 'for my eyes' or 'to my eyes' — 'give me something new for my eyes' is clearer. This addresses present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× So yeah, I prefer this in other countries.

✓ So yeah, I prefer those views in other countries.

The pronoun 'this' does not agree with the plural noun 'views' referenced earlier. Use 'those views' or 'them' to match plurality. This fixes pronoun reference and agreement.