Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains many unclear or incorrect words and some grammar issues. Improve clarity by using correct vocabulary (e.g. "scenes", "landscapes", "moods"), keeping sentences concise, and providing one or two specific reasons with a clear linking phrase. Limit your response to up to five simple sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because landscapes often inspire me. For example, I like photographing sunsets and quiet fields since they capture peaceful moods. I keep these photos to remember special moments and to practise my composition skills.

Sugestão: Your meaning is clear but vocabulary and grammar need correction. Use the correct nouns and articles (e.g. "rural areas", "fresh air") and add a linking word to explain why. Provide a specific detail or example to make the answer more convincing.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because the fresh air and quiet environment help me relax. For instance, I enjoy walking by quiet farms and listening to birds, which makes me feel happier than noisy city streets.

Sugestão: This answer is fairly clear and organized, with a direct statement and contrast. Improve by fixing word choice (e.g. "views" instead of "wheels", "experiences" instead of "experiments") and adding one specific example of a familiar scene and one example of a foreign scene. Use a linking phrase like "on the other hand" to show contrast.

Exemplo: Generally, I prefer views in my own country because familiar landscapes, like coastal cliffs and countryside trails, make me feel safe and relaxed. On the other hand, I also enjoy views abroad because new architecture and different natural scenery offer fresh perspectives and inspiration.

× Yes, I enjoyed taking pictures of different wheels because I found the land cups and the seed camps very inspiring.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I find the landscapes and the seed caps very inspiring.

The student used past tense 'enjoyed' and 'found' which conflicts with the ongoing hobby described; present simple 'enjoy' and 'find' should be used to indicate habitual action. Also 'wheels/land cups/seed camps' seem to be incorrect word choices but the grammatical issue here is tense. Suggest using present simple for habits: 'I enjoy... I find...'. Note: also consider correcting the nouns to 'views' and 'landscapes' for clarity.

× They often capture Moss and emotions like calmness in a sunset of enemy in a big St. and I like keeping those moments to look back on.

✓ They often capture moods and emotions like calmness in a sunset and I like keeping those moments to look back on.

The sentence contains wrong words ('Moss' instead of 'moods', 'enemy' and 'big St.' are unclear) which are lexical errors treated here as incorrect adjective/noun choices affecting meaning. Replace with 'moods' and remove unclear fragments. Also punctuation is needed to join clauses correctly. Suggest simplifying to 'They often capture moods and emotions like calmness in a sunset.'

× I prefer wealth in rural area because rural area is a fresh air and can make me more happy or relaxing.

✓ I prefer the countryside because the rural area has fresh air and can make me happier and more relaxed.

Multiple preposition/article issues: 'in rural area' should be 'the countryside' or 'rural areas'; 'is a fresh air' incorrectly uses article 'a' with uncountable noun 'air'. Also 'more happy or relaxing' is comparative/adjective misuse; use 'happier' and 'more relaxed'. Suggest using 'the countryside' and correct comparatives and uncountable noun usage.

× Generally, I prefer wheels in my own country because I feel safe there and those familiar landscapes make me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ Generally, I prefer views in my own country because I feel safe there and those familiar landscapes make me feel happy and relaxed.

The original used 'wheels' which appears to be a wrong plural noun; 'views' fits the context. This is a singular/plural/word choice issue affecting meaning. Suggest using the correct plural noun 'views' to match the question about 'views'.

× However, I also enjoy views in other countries because they are more refreshing and offer new experiments, such as different architecture and scenery.

✓ However, I also enjoy views in other countries because they are more refreshing and offer new experiences, such as different architecture and scenery.

The word 'experiments' is incorrect; 'experiences' is the correct noun. This is a present-tense habitual statement so present simple 'enjoy' and 'offer' are correct; the problem is lexical choice. Suggest replacing 'experiments' with 'experiences' to convey intended meaning.