Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap doğal ve anlaşılır fakat birkaç dilbilgisi hatası, tekrar ve tutarsızlık var. 1) Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kullan: "Yes, I do." 2) Yardımcı detaylarda bağlaçlarla akışı iyileştir: "Especially when I walk in natural areas, such as mountains, forests or lakes." 3) Tekrarı ve karışık ifadeyi düzelt: "I always bring my camera and sometimes a drone." 4) Maksimum 4–5 cümleyi aşmamaya dikkat et. Özetle; dilbilgisi (preposition ve artikeller), tekrar eden kelimeler ve akışı bağlaçlarla düzelt.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy taking photos when I walk in natural areas, such as mountains, forests and lakes. These places offer interesting textures and colours, so I usually bring my camera and sometimes a drone to capture different perspectives.

Sugestão: Cevap açık ve kısa; ancak kelime seçimi ve dilbilgisi açısından bazı düzeltmeler gerekli. 1) Tekil/çoğul uyumuna dikkat: "forests, trees and lakes." 2) Nedenini daha spesifik bir bağlaçla genişlet: "because they offer..." ardından örnek veya duygu açıklaması ekle. 3) Bağlaçlar ekleyerek cümle akışını güçlendir: "..., which makes me feel relaxed and peaceful." 4) 3-4 cümlede kal ve gereksiz tekrar yapma.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer natural beauty, such as forests, trees and lakes, which help me relax. For example, walking by a quiet lake or under tall trees always calms me and allows me to focus on taking better photos.

Sugestão: Cevabınız anlaşılır fakat bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal tekrarlar var. 1) Daha doğal bir başlangıç: "I definitely prefer the views in my own country." 2) "different type of views" yerine "a wide variety of landscapes" gibi daha uygun ifade kullanın. 3) İkinci cümlede zaman ve yapı hatası: "Each year many tourists visit my country to see these views." 4) Bir veya iki destekleyici detayla cümle sayısını 3–4 ile sınırlayın.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer the views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes, from mountains to forests and lakes. Each year many tourists come to see these natural attractions, and I enjoy photographing them because they are so diverse.

× I like taking pictures especially during walking on natural place like mountain, forest or lake.

✓ I like taking pictures, especially when walking in natural places like mountains, forests, or lakes.

Use 'when' not 'during' with verbs; 'walking' is correct but needs 'when walking'. Use plural forms for countable nouns and appropriate preposition 'in' for places. Add commas for clarity.

× When I go to this place I take my I bring my drone and camera.

✓ When I go to these places, I bring my drone and camera.

Original has duplicated verbs 'take my I bring' and inconsistent singular/plural. Use 'these places' to match earlier plural 'natural places', and 'bring' is the correct verb for carrying items to a location. Add comma after subordinate clause.

× I prefer rural areas because they offer natural beauty like forest, tree or lake.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they offer natural beauty like forests, trees, or lakes.

Use plural forms for general examples of countable nouns. Also include commas between items and 'or' before the last item in a list.

× It makes me feel relaxing and peaceful.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and peaceful.

Use 'relaxed' (adjective describing a person) instead of 'relaxing' (which describes something that causes relaxation). 'Peaceful' is correct.

× I definitely prefer my country's views because they have different type of views like mountain, forest, lake.

✓ I definitely prefer my country's views because they have different types of scenery like mountains, forests, and lakes.

Use plural 'types' to match 'different', and 'scenery' is a better noun. Use plural forms for examples and include articles/commas correctly.

× Each year many tourists visit my country to seeing this view.

✓ Each year many tourists visit my country to see these views.

After 'to' as part of the infinitive, use the base form 'see', not the -ing form 'seeing'. Match plural 'views' with earlier plural references.