Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent, reduce hesitations and repetition, and give a clear reason plus a brief example. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words (for example, because / for instance). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I prefer taking photos from a single viewpoint because it helps me compose the scene more carefully. For example, when I photograph a city skyline from one spot I can adjust the framing and wait for the best light, which usually results in stronger images.

Sugestão: Answer directly and complete the idea with clearer, grammatical sentences. Use linking words to connect your reason and give a specific reason or example. Avoid short, fragmented sentences and filler words.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because they show human activity and architectural variety. For example, I enjoy photographing busy streets and old buildings since they tell stories about the city’s history and culture.

Sugestão: Give a concise, well-structured answer: a clear topic sentence stating your preference, followed by specific reasons and one example. Avoid vague phrases and hesitations; name one or two countries as examples and explain why.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they have more developed urban landscapes. For instance, I like photographing places in Europe or the USA where there are varied architectures and well-maintained public spaces that create more interesting compositions.

× Actually not because, uh, I prefer to take picture, picture from one point.

✓ Actually not, because I prefer taking pictures from one point.

The verb 'prefer' is commonly followed by the gerund form when describing a general preference (prefer doing something). Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because taking multiple photos is implied. Use of 'taking pictures' sounds natural and grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' + verb-ing for general preferences and make count nouns plural when generic (prefer taking pictures).

× Uh, I believe, uh, this technique, uh, will uh, make better pictures than that other thing you, you said.

✓ I believe this technique will produce better pictures than the other method you mentioned.

The original sentence has disfluent fillers and incorrect noun phrase 'that other thing you said.' Replace fillers and use clearer nouns: 'produce' is a more natural verb for 'make pictures,' and 'method you mentioned' is a clearer comparison. Suggestion: Remove fillers and use precise vocabulary for clarity. (This correction addresses sentence structure and clarity.)

× I prefer views in urban area definitely because, uh, I think urban areas, uh.

✓ I definitely prefer views in urban areas because I think urban areas

'Urban area' as a general category should be plural 'urban areas' or use the definite article with singular (the urban area). Also word order: adverb 'definitely' commonly comes before the verb or after the subject. Suggestion: Use plural for general statements and place adverbs in natural positions. (Note: next fragment continues.)

× Demonstrating the civilization of the human being.

✓ demonstrate human civilization.

This fragment is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and finite verb. Converting it into a clause that continues the previous sentence ("because I think urban areas demonstrate human civilization") fixes the structure. Also 'the human being' is awkward; 'human civilization' is natural. Suggestion: Combine fragments into full sentences and use concise nouns.

× And because of that, I love urban areas.

✓ Because of that, I love urban areas.

Starting with 'And' is informal and unnecessary. The rest is grammatical. Suggestion: Omit redundant conjunctions in formal answers.

× In fact, my country doesn't have, uh, very urban areas because it's an, it's not a, uh, high economic country.

✓ In fact, my country doesn't have many urban areas because it is not a highly developed economy.

'Doesn't have very urban areas' is ungrammatical; use 'many urban areas' for countable plural. 'High economic country' is incorrect word order and word choice; 'highly developed economy' or 'high-income country' are appropriate. Suggestion: Use 'many' with countable nouns and correct adjective/adverb forms ('highly developed').

× Because of that, uh, I prefer other countries views same as USA or Europe or China or.

✓ Because of that, I prefer views from other countries, such as the USA, Europe, or China.

Use 'views from other countries' rather than 'other countries views' (possessive or prepositional construction needed). Use 'such as' to introduce examples. Also include the definite article with 'the USA' and avoid trailing 'or.' Suggestion: Use 'views from' and 'such as' when listing examples; ensure articles and punctuation complete the list.