Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 用中文简明具体指出问题并给改进建议： - 语法与句子结构：句子中有冗长和重复（例如 “a lot of people that they say” 应为 “a lot of people say”）。应使用更简洁的主句加上1–2个支持句。 - 连贯性与流利度：有犹豫填词（“uh”），需要练习避免停顿。可用连接词如“however”、“because”等使表达更顺畅。 - 内容具体性：细节不够具体。可举例说明拍照的原因或一两个拍得好的场景来丰富答案。 - 词汇：可替换常用词（like、stuff）为更恰当词汇（enjoy, preserve, scenery, memories）。 改进方法：练习把答案控制在3-4句，第一句直接回答，第二句给原因，第三句举一具体例子或结果。实战练习时计时并复述，减少“uh”之类填词。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories from trips. For example, when I visited the coast last year I took several pictures at sunrise, which remind me of the colours and mood of that morning. However, I also try to balance taking photos with actually enjoying the scene.

Sugestão: 用中文简明具体指出问题并给改进建议： - 语法与表达：存在语法错误和词序问题（“that I familiar to” 应为 “that I'm familiar with” 或 “that I am used to”）。 - 句子完整性：回答太简短且缺乏支持细节。应在首句陈述偏好，接着给1-2个具体理由，例如建筑、氛围或便利性。 - 词汇与多样性：用词单一，可使用更具体词汇如 “architecture”, “vibrant atmosphere”, “convenience”。 改进方法：构建3句回答：直接表态 + 两个具体原因（用连接词like/because/also）。注意语法：主语+be动词+形容词/过去分词。

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I live in cities and feel comfortable there. Urban areas offer interesting architecture and a vibrant atmosphere with lots of cafes and shops. Also, the convenience and public transport make city scenes more appealing to me.

Sugestão: 用中文简明具体指出问题并给改进建议： - 正式程度与用词：口语化词汇过多（“wanna”, “stuff”），考试中应使用更正式表达（want to, things）。 - 句子结构：第二句表达有些重复且不够具体。建议先直接回答，再给两条具体原因并举例。 - 语法与准确度：注意时态和主语一致（例如 “that sees new views” 不自然，应改为 “to see new views”）。 改进方法：回答控制在3句内：第一句表态，第二句给原因并用连接词，第三句举例或说明结果。替换口语词汇并用更准确的动词短语。

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural experiences. For instance, travelling abroad lets me see different architecture and try unfamiliar festivals or foods. Exploring these differences makes trips more exciting and memorable.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I know a lot of people that they say that you shouldn't take pictures while you're traveling.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I know a lot of people who say that you shouldn't take pictures while you're traveling.

句中使用多余的代词“they”造成代词重复并且不符合规范表达。应将关系代词“that”或“who”与主语连用，而不要再加主语“they”。建议使用“who”来指代“people”。另外可以把“that”去掉或仅保留一个关系代词。

× But still, I think I like to memorize the view after the trip is done, so it makes me feel like I have the memory in my family.

✓ But still, I think I like to remember the view after the trip is over, because it makes me feel like I have the memory with my family.

原句存在句子结构和搭配问题（Grammar Problem Type 26）。“memorize the view”不自然，通常用“remember”或“keep a memory of”。“after the trip is done”更自然的说法是“after the trip is over”。“have the memory in my family”搭配错误，应改为“have the memory with my family”或“have memories with my family”。建议用更自然的动词和介词搭配。

× I prefer views in urban areas because I mainly live in urban places that I familiar to, so it makes me have a belonging feeling.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I mainly live in urban places that I am familiar with, so it makes me feel a sense of belonging.

本句存在时态/语态和结构问题（归类为现在时相关问题和句子结构，使用ID 6）。“that I familiar to”缺少系动词和介词顺序错误，应为“that I am familiar with”。“so it makes me have a belonging feeling”中“have a belonging feeling”不地道，常用表达为“feel a sense of belonging”。建议补上系动词并使用正确的介词和习惯搭配。

× I would say I prefer views in other countries because you're used to the views in your own country already.

✓ I would say I prefer views in other countries because you get used to the views in your own country already.

句中代词使用上不一致：前文主语是“I”，后句却用“you're”指代听者，造成人称混乱，应保持人称一致或使用一般叙述结构。原句也可用“you're used to”但语境更自然的表达为“一般人/人们会习惯本国的景色”，因此改为“you get used to”或改成“I'm used to”。建议根据说话人视角统一人称。

× Of course you wanna explore new stuff that sees new views, new customs and new people.

✓ Of course you want to explore new things and see new views, new customs and new people.

原句存在形容词/副词及词类使用错误（ID 13）和句子结构问题。“wanna”为口语缩略不正式，建议写作“want to”。“new stuff that sees new views”中“stuff”不够具体且“that sees”把“stuff”误作具有人称的主体，应改为并列结构“explore new things and see new views”。此外“see new people”通常说“meet new people”。建议使用更准确的词汇并调整动词搭配。