Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện trọng tâm câu trả lời và ngữ pháp: hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Chú ý tới chia động từ và danh từ (ví dụ: “help me remember happy moments”), tránh tiếng ừ ừ, và thay cụm từ mơ hồ như “Spacey play” bằng từ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản (because, so, and) để làm rõ lý do.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me remember happy moments and relax. For example, when I visit a seaside or a park, I take pictures to keep the memory and revisit it later.

Sugestão: Làm rõ ý và cấu trúc câu: mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng nêu sở thích (urban or rural). Sau đó giải thích lý do bằng một hoặc hai câu với cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh, tránh ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “It helps me relax when I’m stressed”). Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa (“And everyone very”) và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về những điều khiến bạn cảm thấy thư giãn.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they help me relax. When I feel stressed, I enjoy walking in quiet fields or forests, listening to birds, which calms me down.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng câu rõ ràng (Yes, I prefer… or No, I prefer…). Tránh nói lặp lại và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Giải thích lý do bằng ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: kỷ niệm gia đình, văn hóa quen thuộc). Nếu muốn so sánh, dùng cấu trúc so sánh đơn giản (compared to).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and remind me of home. For instance, scenes of local markets and family gatherings make me feel nostalgic, whereas landscapes abroad can feel less personal.

× I like taking a picture of different view because it's help me.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because they help me.

The sentence needs plural forms: 'pictures' and 'views' (singular/plural). 'It's' (it is) is incorrect; use 'they' to match plural subject and 'help' (base form) for plural subject. Also 'taking a picture of different view' should use plural to indicate variety. Suggestion: use plural nouns and match the pronoun and verb to plural subjects.

× It's help me uh, remember happy uh moment and Spacey play.

✓ They help me remember happy moments and the special places.

'It's help' is ungrammatical: use 'they help' to agree with plural 'pictures' or 'views'. 'Remember' follows 'help' with base form. 'Happy uh moment' should be plural 'happy moments'. 'Spacey play' seems intended as 'special places'; correct vocabulary and pluralization are needed. Suggestion: use correct words and plural forms, and keep verb agreement.

× I like rural area be uh because it's help me to relax and.

✓ I like rural areas because they help me to relax.

Change 'rural area' to plural 'rural areas' for general preference. Remove unnecessary filler 'be uh' and trailing 'and'. Use 'they help me to relax' or 'they help me relax' with plural pronoun and verb agreement. Suggestion: omit fillers and ensure pronoun matches noun number.

× Every time, Uh, when I stressed.

✓ Every time I am stressed,

Fragment: 'Every time, when I stressed.' lacks proper verb form and structure. Use 'when I am stressed' or 'when I'm stressed' to form a full clause. Suggestion: include auxiliary 'am' for present state and remove redundant 'every time' or combine properly.

× And everyone very.

✓ and feel very relaxed.

Sentence fragment and wrong word choices: 'everyone very' is incomplete. Likely intended 'I feel very relaxed' or 'everyone is very relaxed'. Use proper subject and adjective or adverb. Suggestion: supply missing verb and choose correct adjective/adverb.

× Unlike our country, because it's a homeland, it is.

✓ I prefer my own country because it is my homeland.

Unclear structure: 'Unlike our country' conflicts with intent. Use 'I prefer my own country' to answer preference question. 'Because it's a homeland, it is' is repetitive; replace with 'because it is my homeland.' Suggestion: state subject and verb clearly and avoid redundant phrases.

× It was a it was an end up beside.

✓ It has always been the place I end up beside.

Original phrase is ungrammatical and confusing. Use present perfect 'has always been' to indicate ongoing state, and clarify meaning 'the place I end up beside' if intended. Alternatively, if meaning is different, rephrase accordingly. Suggestion: use clear verb tense and logical phrasing to express the idea.