Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid fillers. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., use 'scenery' or 'landscapes' rather than 'scenarios') and correct minor word choice and spelling (e.g., 'especially').

Exemplo: Yes — I enjoy taking photos of different scenery, especially when I travel. For example, I often photograph coastal landscapes and historic cityscapes, because each place offers unique colours and textures that tell a story.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference (or neutrality) and follow with a specific reason and example. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'charge my attention' and remove repetition. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'however' to make the answer coherent.

Exemplo: I don’t have a strong preference between urban and rural views because both offer different kinds of beauty. For instance, I like city skylines for their architecture and vibrant life, while rural scenes appeal to me for their tranquillity and natural colours.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give specific reasons and correct grammar and repetition errors (remove duplicate words, use 'my country' or 'motherland' and correct tense: 'since childhood'). Use linking words like 'because' and provide a short example or feeling to make it personal.

Exemplo: At the moment I prefer views in my own country because I haven’t travelled abroad yet and my homeland feels familiar and meaningful. For example, I love photographing the old streets and countryside where I grew up, because they remind me of family and childhood memories.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of diverse scenarios, specially when I travel.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of diverse scenarios, especially when I travel.

The word 'specially' is incorrect in this context; 'especially' should be used to indicate something that stands out or is preferred. 'Specially' means 'for a special purpose' and is rarely used in general preference statements. Replace 'specially' with 'especially'. Suggestion: learn common adverb pairs and their meanings (specially vs especially).

× I like taking pictures of, uh, different landscapes as each view is unique to the place.

✓ I like taking pictures of different landscapes because each view is unique to the place.

The casual filler 'uh' should be removed in writing. The conjunction 'as' can mean 'because' but may be ambiguous; 'because' is clearer for explaining a reason. Also remove the extra comma before 'different'. Suggestion: use 'because' for explicit reasons and avoid filler words in formal responses.

× I do not have specific preferences regarding urban areas or rural areas as. As it can be anything that can charge my attention.

✓ I do not have specific preferences regarding urban or rural areas because it can be anything that catches my attention.

The original has a sentence fragment ('as.') and an awkward phrase 'charge my attention.' Use 'because' to join reason and replace 'charge my attention' with the correct verb phrase 'catches my attention'. Also streamline 'urban areas or rural areas' to 'urban or rural areas'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use correct collocations ('catch attention').

× As of now, I prefer views in my own country as I have never visited foreign countries.

✓ At the moment, I prefer views in my own country because I have never visited foreign countries.

'As of now' is not wrong but 'At the moment' is more natural. Additionally, 'as' used twice is repetitive; use 'because' for clarity. No article error in this sentence, but wording improved for naturalness. Suggestion: prefer clearer conjunctions like 'because' when giving reasons and use more natural time phrases.

× Views of my own own motherland is very close to my heart as I grew up here since child.

✓ Views of my own motherland are very close to my heart as I grew up here since childhood.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Views' is plural and requires 'are' rather than 'is' (subject-verb agreement error). 'Own' is duplicated; remove one. 'Since child' is incorrect; use the noun 'childhood' to indicate the period. Suggestion: check plural subjects with verb forms and use correct noun forms for age/time expressions.