Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with tense and word form, avoid repetition, and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. For example, correct verb forms (I post, not posted) and avoid repeating phrases like "different views."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I love traveling. For example, when I visit a new city I often capture cityscapes and local landmarks, and then I post a few of my favorite shots on social media to share with friends.

Sugestão: Use correct verbs and avoid redundancy. Begin with a clear preference statement, then add cohesive supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Remove repeated phrases ('I could take I can take') and be specific about what makes rural views appealing.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are less crowded and offer peaceful scenery. For instance, I often photograph fields and mountains there, which give me clearer, more atmospheric shots for my social media posts.

Sugestão: This answer has several problems: incorrect words ('beers'), grammar errors, and vague, negative generalization about your country. Start with a clear, accurate topic sentence and give a reason with specific examples. Avoid absolute statements about your country and correct contractions and word choice.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I often find different landscapes and architectural styles that I haven't seen at home. For example, I enjoyed photographing coastal cliffs and historic towns on my last trip abroad, which offered new perspectives compared with nearby locations.

× I always take pictures of different views and then posted in social media.

✓ I always take pictures of different views and then post them on social media.

The sentence mixes present simple ('take') with past tense 'posted'. To maintain consistent present habitual action use present simple 'post'. Also 'posted' lacks object 'them' and correct preposition is 'on' for social media. Suggestion: use 'post them on social media' for clarity.

× I always take pictures of different views and then posted in social media.

✓ I always take pictures of different views and then post them on social media.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for online platforms; use 'on social media'. Also include the object 'them' after 'post'.

× I prepare views in rural areas because they are less crowded and the scenery is more peaceful, so I could take I can take better photos there for social media, especially landscapes like fields or mountains.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are less crowded and the scenery is more peaceful, so I can take better photos there for social media, especially landscapes like fields or mountains.

The original has word choice error 'prepare' instead of 'prefer', redundant 'I could take I can take' and awkward structure. Use 'prefer' to match the question; use 'can' to express ability in present; remove redundancy. Ensure smooth clause connection.

× I prefer views in your own country or in other countries? Student: I prefer beers in other countries because in my country we have don't we don't have beautiful places and like other countries where you can enjoy and take photos, landscapes and portrait photos and beautiful mountains.

✓ I prefer to travel to other countries because in my country we don't have as many beautiful places as in other countries where you can enjoy and take landscape and portrait photos of beautiful mountains.

Multiple problems: 'beers' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'places' or 'to travel to other countries'. The clause 'we have don't we don't have' is ungrammatical and duplicates negation. Also comparison needs 'as many... as'. Use contraction 'we don't' once. Adjust noun phrases to 'landscape and portrait photos of beautiful mountains.' Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement and correct word choice 'prefer to travel to other countries'.

× I prefer beers in other countries because in my country we have don't we don't have beautiful places and like other countries where you can enjoy and take photos, landscapes and portrait photos and beautiful mountains.

✓ I prefer to travel to other countries because in my country we don't have as many beautiful places as in other countries where you can enjoy and take landscape and portrait photos of beautiful mountains.

Pronoun and reference issues: 'beers' is wrong noun; unclear references 'like other countries' should be 'as in other countries'. Remove duplicated 'we have don't we don't' and ensure pronoun 'we' correctly pairs with 'don't have'. Use clearer noun phrases.