Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pemilihan kata agar jawaban terdengar lebih natural dan jelas. Misalnya, ganti frasa yang tidak tepat seperti "a bit fuse" atau "natural fuse" dengan kata yang benar seperti "urban scenes" atau "natural landscapes". Buat satu kalimat topik langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik (mis. subjek foto favorit dan alasan). Hindari pengulangan dan kata-kata pengisi seperti "uh".

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing natural landscapes because I find their colors and textures more interesting than urban scenes. For example, I often take photos of sunsets by the sea because the light creates dramatic silhouettes and reflections.

Sugestão: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa, mulai dengan kalimat topik yang jelas (mis. "I prefer rural areas"). Jelaskan alasan secara spesifik dengan linking words seperti "because" atau "so" dan berikan contoh singkat. Hindari fragmen tidak lengkap seperti "But." di akhir.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded, which makes it easier to capture peaceful landscapes. For instance, I like photographing rice fields in the early morning when the mist gives a soft, calm atmosphere.

Sugestão: Perjelas pilihan dengan struktur yang benar dan kosakata yang tepat. Mulai dengan kalimat topik jelas (mis. "I prefer views in other countries"). Jelaskan alasan spesifik—mis. ingin melihat budaya dan lanskap yang berbeda—dan berikan satu contoh konkret. Hindari kalimat yang tidak jelas seperti "How is the fuses?" serta gunakan kata yang tepat seperti "landscapes" atau "scenery".

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultural scenery. For example, I would love to photograph traditional hanok villages in Korea to capture their unique architecture and seasonal colors.

× I really like taking pictures of a different view, especially for, uh, a bit fuse or natural fuse.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenes.

Incorrect use of 'a' with plural idea and unclear noun 'fuse'. Use plural 'views' after 'pictures of'. Replace vague 'a bit fuse'/'natural fuse' with 'natural scenes' to convey landscapes. Use gerund 'taking' correctly remains. Suggestion: Use clear nouns and correct singular/plural alignment: 'pictures of different views', 'natural scenes'.

× I don't like just taking the with the same feels.

✓ I don't like just taking the same kinds of photos.

Missing and incorrect articles: 'the with the same feels' is ungrammatical. 'Feel' is the wrong noun; use 'kinds of photos' or 'same kind of shots'. Ensure correct noun choice and remove unnecessary 'the'. Suggestion: Say 'I don't like taking the same kinds of photos' or 'I don't like taking the same shots'.

× That's why I love taking pictures of all different views.

✓ That's why I love taking pictures of many different views.

Sentence is mostly correct but 'all different views' is awkward; 'many different views' is more natural. Present participle 'taking' is fine. Suggestion: Use 'many different views' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer take a few than rural areas because if you like quiet and maybe it's good for me and it's have a better view there because it's not that crowded over there.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because I like quiet places, and they are better for views since they are not as crowded.

Incorrect verb form: after 'prefer' use noun or 'prefer X to Y' structure, not 'prefer take'. Tense and agreement errors: 'it's have' should be 'they have' or 'they are'. Also clarify comparison: prefer rural to urban. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'they are not as crowded'.

× That's why I choose a rural areas.

✓ That's why I choose rural areas.

Incorrect article+noun: 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun. Remove 'a' or use singular: 'a rural area'. Suggestion: Use 'rural areas' or 'a rural area' consistently.

× Of course I will choose another country because I have already know about the fields in Indonesia, but that's why I want to say another feels or another perspective of another country.

✓ Of course I would choose another country because I already know about the fields in Indonesia, and I want to see different landscapes and perspectives abroad.

Tense and modal: 'I will choose' is acceptable but 'would choose' or 'I would prefer' is more polite; main error is 'have already know' — correct is 'already know' or 'have already known' depending on meaning. 'Another feels' is incorrect noun choice; use 'different landscapes' or 'different perspectives'. Also 'say' is wrong verb here; use 'see' or 'experience'. Suggestion: Use correct perfect/present: 'I already know' or 'I have already seen' and choose appropriate nouns: 'landscapes', 'perspectives'.

× For example in Korea hobbies looks like. How is the fuses?

✓ For example, in Korea the scenery looks different. How are the views there?

Ungrammatical fragments: 'in Korea hobbies looks like' is unclear and lacks proper subject-verb agreement ('hobbies looks' incorrect). 'How is the fuses?' mixes singular verb with plural noun. Replace with clear nouns: 'scenery' or 'views', and match verb number: 'How are the views?'. Suggestion: Use complete sentence structure and subject-verb agreement: 'the scenery looks different' and 'How are the views there?'.