Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and grammar errors, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and article usage. For example, replace “I like photography are too much” with “I really enjoy photography,” and remove filler words like “umm.”

Exemplo: I really enjoy photography. When I travel I always take photos of landscapes and city scenes because they help me remember the atmosphere and share it with friends. For instance, I recently photographed a sunset over a lake which captured the colours perfectly.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give specific reasons linked logically using connectors. Fix vocabulary and grammar (e.g. “I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and full of greenery, which reflects nature’s beauty and refreshes me”). Limit to max 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and full of greenery, which helps me relax. For example, walking among fields and trees clears my mind and I enjoy photographing open landscapes and small villages for their natural colours.

Sugestão: Answer directly first (I prefer views in my country / I’d like to see other countries), then explain with specific reasons. Correct grammar (e.g. “I often travel within my country and haven’t visited others yet”), avoid unclear words like “reluctant.” Keep it concise and give an example of a country or landscape you’d like to see.

Exemplo: I usually prefer views in my own country because I travel here most often and know the best spots. However, I would love to visit other countries, especially places like New Zealand, to see dramatic mountains and unique wildlife that I can’t find at home.

× I like photography are too much umm, when I go somewhere I like take pictures and I see the views of this.

✓ I like photography very much; when I go somewhere I like to take pictures and see the views.

Errors: 'are' is incorrect after 'photography' (sentence structure/verb misuse) and 'like take' misses 'to' (verb + infinitive). Type fits 'Sentence structure errors' (26) and 'Verb + -ing form' or infinitive issue; per list use type 26. Suggestion: remove 'are', use 'very much', and use 'like to take' or 'enjoy taking'.

× I personally use in rural areas because they are very peaceful and full of green things and it consequences and reflects the beauty of nature.

✓ I personally prefer rural areas because they are very peaceful and full of greenery, and they reflect the beauty of nature.

Errors: 'use in rural areas' is wrong verb choice and preposition; should be 'prefer rural areas' (verb/preposition). 'Green things' is unnatural; use 'greenery'. 'It consequences' is incorrect subject and verb; should be 'they reflect' (pronoun agreement and verb). This fits 'Incorrect use of prepositions' (11) and 'Subject-verb agreement/pronoun' issues (27/12); use type 11. Suggestion: use 'prefer', 'greenery', and make pronoun agree with plural 'areas'.

× Nature and it gives me the refreshment of world.

✓ Nature gives me a sense of refreshment.

Errors: 'Nature and it' is redundant and ungrammatical; choose a single subject. 'the refreshment of world' is incorrect article use and word choice. This fits 'Incorrect use of pronouns' (12) and 'Article errors' (22); use type 12. Suggestion: use 'Nature gives me a sense of refreshment' or 'Nature refreshes me'.

× I actually often go manywhere in my countries, but I don't visit any other country, so I don't know.

✓ I actually often travel to many places in my country, but I have not visited any other country, so I don't know.

Errors: 'manywhere' is not a word; use 'many places' or 'many places' and 'in my countries' should be 'in my country' (singular). Tense and aspect: use present perfect 'have not visited' to indicate life experience. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (26). Suggestion: use 'travel to many places' and 'have not visited any other country'.

× But I think that I want to go another country to visit and observe the beauty of that countries.

✓ But I think that I want to go to another country to visit and observe the beauty of that country.

Errors: 'go another country' needs preposition 'to' and 'that countries' mismatches number; singular should match 'another country'. This is a 'Singular and plural issue' (1) and preposition missing (11); use type 1. Suggestion: say 'go to another country' and 'that country' or use plural consistently: 'other countries' and 'those countries'.

× And particularly I want to see the natural resources in our world, which is very reluctant and very beautiful.

✓ In particular, I want to see the natural resources of the world, which are very rich and beautiful.

Errors: 'which is very reluctant' is incorrect word choice; 'reluctant' describes people, not resources. 'Natural resources... which are' requires plural verb agreement. This fits 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (13) and 'Subject-verb agreement' (27); use type 13. Suggestion: use adjectives like 'rich' or 'abundant' and ensure 'are' for plural 'resources'.