Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I like taking picture of different views. I always take some photos about the natural things, but in the city there are different, maybe more about the people face calls or anything like that. I really like to take in different is different life.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
Yes, I prefer views in the seating hours because, uh, I grew up in the city and they're all the things I know about, uh, and I really like the call codes and uh, and different people, different knives in the thinking they show me or not.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
Yes, I prefer the views in my countries from China and you know, in China there are lots of, you know, natural beauty things and we get a lot of history. There are many old beauty.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Pontuação: 54.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接并用清晰句子表达意图,避免语法错误和重复,用连接词组织细节并给出具体例子。可以用1句主题句表明喜好,接着用1–2句具体说明拍摄对象与原因,最后可加一句总结性评价。注意名词单复数、冠词和词汇搭配(e.g. "natural scenes", "people's faces")。
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I mostly take pictures of natural scenes like mountains and rivers because they change with light and weather. In cities I focus more on people and street scenes to capture everyday life. For example, last weekend I photographed a market where vendors were selling fruit, which made an interesting contrast to my nature photos.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答应直接表明偏好並用清楚理由支撑。避免含糊不清和语音填充词(uh)。用连词连接原因和例子(e.g. "because", "so", "for example")。纠正词汇错误(如"seating hours"应为"urban areas"或"cities")。尽量用2–3句:一句主题句,一句原因,一句具体例子。
Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and feel more connected to its atmosphere. Cities offer diverse scenes like busy streets and street art, which inspire my photography. For example, I often photograph market stalls and commuters because they show everyday life and emotion.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Pontuação: 52.0Sugestão: 回答要明确比较并给出具体原因和例子。避免重复口头禅("you know")和不准确表达("many old beauty")。用一两句说明偏好及理由,再补充具体地点或历史景点作为支持。保持语言简洁自然。
Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, China, because it combines stunning natural landscapes with rich historical sites. For instance, I love photographing places like the Great Wall and classical gardens in Suzhou, which show both natural beauty and cultural history.
× Yes, I like taking picture of different views.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
原句中 picture 應為複數 pictures,因為表示一般性地拍攝許多不同的景色,用複數更符合語境。建議將名詞變為複數以匹配動作的頻率和泛指意義。
× I always take some photos about the natural things, but in the city there are different, maybe more about the people face calls or anything like that.
✓ I always take some photos of natural things, but in the city it's different — maybe more about people's faces or things like that.
原句中應使用介詞 of 來表示拍攝對象(photos of natural things),而不是 about。people face 應為 people's faces(所有格+複數)或用 faces 表達多個人的臉。建議使用 of 表示對象,並用所有格或複數名詞使語義清楚。
× I really like to take in different is different life.
✓ I really like to capture different kinds of life.
原句結構混亂,'take in different is different life' 非標準表達。應用動詞 capture 或 take photos of 並使用名詞短語 different kinds of life 表達“不同的生活”。建議簡化為常見搭配(capture/take photos of + object)。
× Yes, I prefer views in the seating hours because, uh, I grew up in the city and they're all the things I know about, uh, and I really like the call codes and uh, and different people, different knives in the thinking they show me or not.
✓ Yes, I prefer views in the city because I grew up there and it's what I'm familiar with. I really like the local scenes and different people — the way they think or show themselves.
原句多處介詞及詞語使用不當:'seating hours' 意義不明,應為 city;'they're all the things I know about' 非自然表達,應改為 I'm familiar with 或 I know; 'call codes' 應為 local scenes 或 local customs;'different knives' 顯然是錯誤詞彙,應為 different kinds/ways 或 people's differences。建議使用簡單正確的介詞和固定搭配(prefer views in the city; grew up there; familiar with; local scenes)。
× Yes, I prefer the views in my countries from China and you know, in China there are lots of, you know, natural beauty things and we get a lot of history.
✓ Yes, I prefer the views in my country, China. You know, in China there are lots of natural beauties and a lot of history.
原句中 countries 應為 country(說的是自己的國家),natural beauty things 用法不自然,改為 natural beauties 或 natural beauty spots(更常用)。另外 'we get a lot of history' 不自然,改為 there is a lot of history 或 has a lot of history。建議使用單數 country 並使用常見短語如 natural beauty/beauty spots、a lot of history。
× There are many old beauty.
✓ There are many ancient sites/There are many beautiful old places.
原句 many old beauty 語法錯誤;beauty 是不可數名詞,不能直接與 old 搭配形成可數短語。應改為 ancient sites 或 beautiful old places 等,根據想表達的意思選擇合適名詞。建議使用可數名詞(sites/places/attractions)或改為 'much beauty' 表示不可數概念。