Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and add a specific example with a linking word. Use 2–4 sentences total. Focus on precise word choice (e.g., “angle” not “views” twice) and correct structures (e.g., “look very different”).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because changing the angle can make a scene more dramatic. For example, shooting a building from ground level highlights its height, whereas an aerial shot emphasizes its layout. This contrast often makes my photos more interesting.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, fix grammar and word choice, and explain with a specific reason or example using a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like “human desires” and terms like “naturistic” — use “natural” or “peaceful.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. For example, seeing rolling fields and old trees helps me relax after a busy week, so I often go hiking in the countryside.

Sugestão: Answer directly and provide a specific reason with supporting detail. Correct awkward phrasing (“better and more” is unclear). Use linking words like “because” or “for example” and give a concrete example of what makes foreign views appealing. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural sights I haven't seen before. For example, visiting coastal villages abroad showed me different architectural styles and colors, which inspired my photography.

× I do like taking the pictures from a different views because it shows and makes the photo more deeper.

✓ I like taking pictures from different views because they make the photo deeper.

The original has several issues: 'do like' is unnecessary for simple preference so use 'like'; 'taking the pictures' incorrectly uses the definite article and conflicts with plural 'views' — use 'taking pictures' (no article) and 'different views' (plural without 'a'); 'from a different views' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'views'; 'it shows and makes the photo more deeper' has pronoun-number mismatch and incorrect comparative 'more deeper' (double comparative). Use 'they make the photo deeper' to match plural 'views' and use 'deeper' alone. Suggestion: keep verbs and subjects in agreement and avoid redundant auxiliaries. Note: This suggestion addresses verb+ -ing usage and related article/plural issues per the allowed list.

× For example, a photo from a different angle could look at very different from other angles.

✓ For example, a photo taken from a different angle could look very different from photos taken from other angles.

'look at very different' is incorrect: the verb 'look' does not require 'at' in this construction, and the sentence lacks clarity about comparison. Also 'a photo from a different angle' is fine but 'from other angles' should match as 'photos taken from other angles' for parallelism. Use 'taken' to indicate the photo's perspective. Suggestion: remove unnecessary preposition 'at' and make the compared items parallel for clarity. Note: This focuses on sentence structure and preposition use within allowed problem types.

× That's why I think.

✓ That's why I think so.

The phrase 'That's why I think' is grammatically possible but incomplete in natural spoken English; adding 'so' completes the idea and links back to the previous statement. Suggestion: use 'That's why I think so' to sound more natural and complete. Note: This addresses present tense phrasing and natural sentence completion.

× I prefer the views in the rural areas because rural areas has a naturistic vibe that can coincide with my human desires from an early age.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have a natural vibe that has matched my desires since early childhood.

Errors: 'the views in the rural areas' uses unnecessary articles — 'views in rural areas' is more natural; 'rural areas has' is subject-verb disagreement: plural 'areas' requires 'have'; 'naturistic' is not standard English — use 'natural'; 'can coincide with my human desires from an early age' is awkward and unclear. Replace with 'have matched my desires since early childhood' to express a past-to-present connection. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs, choose standard adjective forms, and rephrase for clarity and naturalness. Note: Changes adhere to subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× I prefer views from other countries because it will be a new experience.

✓ I prefer views from other countries because it would be a new experience.

Tense and modality: 'I prefer' is present; saying 'it will be a new experience' implies certainty about a specific future event. In hypotheticals about general preference, 'would be' is more appropriate to express potential or conditional experience. Suggestion: use 'would be' to match the hypothetical sense when talking about a general preference for something new. Note: Addressed present/future tense nuance.

× It is better and more.

✓ I think it's better and more interesting.

The original 'It is better and more.' is incomplete and lacks an object for 'more'. Add a comparative adjective like 'interesting' to complete the idea: 'better and more interesting.' Suggestion: always complete comparative statements with what they modify. Note: This corrects incomplete sentence structure.